Synder-Ella - Episode 11

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“Stop the car!” Katrina shouted and the car stopped.

They were in the town already and were just on their way to the palace.

“Are we there already?” The driver asked.

“No, not yet, I need to call my mum. I need to know if that girl got my gown or not.” Katrina replied and brought out her phone, then she began  to make a call.

Pauline picked at once.

“My princess, where are you?”

“Mama. Did you know that girl forgot to pick my gown?”

Pauline shouted, “oh my God, where are you?”

“We are in the town but still far from the palace, did you see Synder at all?” She asked.

“No dear, you should have called me at once . Let me call the tailor if she has seen her. I will call you back. Just remain calm my darling.”

“Yes mum, please hurry.” She said and ended the call.

She was restless. They haven’t actually entered the main town but were still at the outskirt.

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. She could see several beautiful cars adorned with ornamentals passing, she could tell by the design that our competitors would be inside, the cars spoke wealth and class.

She sighed, she needed to win this and she had her own magic-her shoes.

“Oh dear! Frank, please tell me that girl didn’t go with the brown bag!”

Frank looked at her from the rear mirror

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. “I have no idea, my lady.”

Her heart sank, “open the boot, now!” She shouted and thought of climbing out but realized that her gown would be dirty, “Frank get out, check the boot for the bags, bring all of them now!”

Frank frowned but did as they were told. Katrina checked the bags and realized that the bag in which she had kept the shoes was  not amongst the rest.

She shut her eyes in disappointment. Oh no! Her heart was beating faster...just then her phone rang.

“Mama!” She said, picking the call.

“She said the cloth had been stolen Katrina!” Her mother screamed.

“Oh no no!” Katrina cried, “I will call you back mum.” She said, ending the call. “Frank, take me back now, right away!”


By the side of the road, two policemen waited with two big guns. Deeper in the bushes along the same axis was a black van, in it were two men as well.

The first man looked quite uncomfortable and nervous while the one in the driver’s seat who was the leader was comfortable and was busy smoking. 

“Oh, I’m so tired. Do you think we are late?” The first man said from the van.

“No, I don’t think so.” Replied the leader, sitting in the driver’s seat.

“So why are we not seeing any princess then?” Asked the first man.

“Don’t worry, I have a guard in the palace, he said they are still expecting like four more princesses.” The leader replied, puffing the cigar in between his lips.

The first man looked worried and checked the time, then he faced front.

“Bango and China have been waiting there for a while...”

“Shut the fuck up alright!” The leader thundered, his eyes reddened and nostrils flared.

The man kept quiet even though he looked offended. All of a sudden, the walkie talkie in the hand of the leader made a strange noise and he answered it.

“Bango, what is the situation, over.”

“There is car approaching, I think this is our chance. Over.”


On the other side of the road, there was a path that led straight down to a cabin. Henry sat at the window side, looking through his binoculars.

Three men were with him, waiting for his call.

“So, what do you say boss?” Asked the man.

“Wait.” Henry said, “hold on, I see a car approaching. We just need to wait a little till it gets closer.” He replied.


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  • TOSH picture
    I bet team henry wil take ella (pls pls pls).., and the team nappers kat pls
  • Oluwadare Mojisola picture
    Oluwadare Mojisola
    Henry will see Ella car
  • Confy-Dencie picture
    OMG....Tell me Henry will see Synder's car oo
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    Ayomide Huntress
    I'm scared cos it seems the real pincessnapperi dressed like police and not Henry's men
  • chijay picture
    Interesting . Keep it coming.
  • Peesam picture
    Team Henry shld sha catch Team Ella n zi, any other team kidnap katrina n her driver
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    Tobi Loba
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    Tobi Loba
    lol@Moji.. sis mi... you are in the spirit
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba not seeing it yet in the vision o
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    Tobi Loba
    @Nikita.. heheh
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    lol@Ayomide... sis first take hugs... I miss you
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks chijay
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    Tobi Loba
    hahah@Peesam... are we seeing the same vision... the ministry is moving. lol... I've not forgotten about the request... I've not added a new important character
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    Tobi Loba
    lol@Ayomide... sis first take hugs... I miss you
  • Benedicta Osei Arhin picture
    Benedicta Osei Arhin
    Thanks Tobi, I was missing in action but am back, I guess the police nappers will kidnap Synder and her friend or, can't really tell oh cuz Tobi can be very deceptive at times, she only knows what happens next oh. Nice story sis, love ya
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    Tobi Loba
    loool@Benedicta. welcome back sis.. missed you
  • Zichat Gwazah picture
    Zichat Gwazah
    Pls zi n Ella should be kidnap by Henry's team den kat d oda team so at least her mother can pay them off..... Please lord save this two
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  • Olasumbo Ayodeji picture
    Olasumbo Ayodeji
    Hmm, issokay oo, d war has begun
  • Celestina Oranye picture
    Celestina Oranye
    Nd we re on a time bomb waiting to explode.... Team #HenryElla#
  • Katherine Kulman picture
    Katherine Kulman
    Tobilove ... Plz continue wae
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    Tobi Loba
    heheh, yes o@Olasumbo, otisele
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    Tobi Loba
    lol@Cel, who else would you support
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    Tobi Loba
    lol@Katherine, sis hope you not the Katrina in the story, lol
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    Ayomide Huntress
    OluwaTobiloba love I'm so sorry I'm suppose so
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    Ayomide Huntress
    To send kisses b4 any comment n atleast say ekule as a Yoruba blood
  • Ucheoma Rufus picture
    Ucheoma Rufus
    Ella will be a kidnap victim and I think she will not regret it . Good one
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    Tobi Loba
    hahah@Ayomide... e kabooo
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