Redemption - Episode 12

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Benedicta:

  Luis is back and he was at my church, probably looking for me. I have mixed feelings about that. I don't want anything to do with guys right now but according to Ade, Luis has the right to know about his baby. Yes, after puking my guts in front of Ade, I had broken down and she consoled me. I just wanted to get everything off my chest so I told Ade . I needed someone to advise me and since Jules who is the wise one of our group isn't in town right now, Ade was my only choice.

   She had been mad that I kept it all from her but she still gave me a shoulder to cry on.
"You need to talk to Luis. You have to get a test done to k ow how far gone you are. You are probably more than a month pregnant so I am not sure if the pregnancy can be flushed. Talk to Luis. He should know more. Hell, he might want to keep it." These were are words and I keep pondering them. I have to speak to Luis. I don't know how to face him. I avoided him for more than a month only to meet him and dump this on him? He won't be happy and I know that but he has to know. I need to find a solution ASAP.

"Benedicta, you ain't eating your food "my dad's voice bring me back to the present where I am having breakfast with my family.
"I don't have much appetite" I tell him and concern wash over his face.
That face would blow up once he discovers my condition. I can't do that to my dad

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. God, please.
"Are you okay baby? You have been behaving sluggish for some days now. Saw you sleeping on the couch just yesterday morning and your choir members told me you left early before the end of yesterday's practice." Dad says.
"Ummm" I am already hyperventilating.
"Are you sick" he continues and I choke on my food. I am sure I look green right now. Does he know? No no. No!
"This is why I told you to stop staying up at night, watching all those Korean movies. Those mosquitoes must have feasted on you." He says then turn to Philip. I heave a deep sigh. This is the advantage of having a single dad. He doesn't understand these things or he would have busted me weeks ago Even before I find out about my condition, a mother would have.
"Take your sister to get a malaria teat done later today okay?" Philip starts nodding but I quickly stand up and walk to stand behind my dad's chair. I rub both his shoulder.
"No need to bother Philip. I am sure he has a lot to do today right Phillip?" I give my brother a sign which he catch up on easily.
"Uh, yea dad. I won't be chanced today" he says which questioning me with his eyes.
"But__"
"Ade's aunt walk in the lab so ade can take me." I say cutting my dad off.
"Perhaps I am no longer a kid. When this long strike is called off, it's just me out there. I need to start taking care of myself without you guys." I tell him.
"Just let her be." I hear Favour grunt from his plate of eggs but I ignore him.
Dad gets up from his chair and hug me.
"I am so happy to hear you talk so maturely baby. I love you okay?" He says into my ear and tears threaten to spill. This pregnancy hormones are just annoying. I pat my dad's back and wipe my tears discreetly. Philip raise his brow at me but I just smile at him.
"Okay, I am off to a meeting in the church then I would handle some counseling session. Don't know when I will be back so take care guys." Dad wave at us before flying out the door.
"I have to go out too" I say and start walking out but Philip's voice stop me.
"Bennie. Wait" I roll my eyes but stop anyways.
"What's going on with you?" He question and I shrug.
"Look Philip. I don't want you to worry. I just have the flu. I would be fine after taking my drugs. Right now, I have to go" I tell him and start walking away but he grabs my hand and pull me to him in a hug.
"I can see something is bothering you and you don't want to tell me. I just want you to know I will always be here for you okay?" I hold the sob that wants to burst out but just hug my brother tighter.
"Thanks" I force out before he let's me go.
"Laters Philip" I wave before walking into the street where I hail a taxi.. I let the car start moving before I burst into body wracking tears. My life is over. I can feel the taxi man watching me.
"I am a disappointment" I sob out. I see him shake his head before handing me a Kleenex to wipe my face with.
"That your brother?" He asks and I nod. He must have seen me through the mirror because he continues speaking
"When your family love you, they don't care if you disappointed them. You just have to make things right." He tells me before pulling over beside Luis's house.
"Your stop, ma'am" he says before getting out of the car and opening my door. I offer him money but he just shakes his head. I don't know why but I hug the strange taxi driver. He pats my back soothingly. I need to get my self together. I take several deep breathes to steady me but then I hear Luis yell my name and I pull away from the taxi driver.
"What the hell are you doing hugging another man in front of my house? Oh, you came to tell me that you can't be with me so you wanted to make it clear by bringing your new boyfriend? Wait, did you seduce him like you did me before you dump me Six months ago?" He keeps ranting and my anger gets the better of me and I slap him across the face.
"Bennie" he seems stun but I don't stop there.
"I am sorry for causing troubles. I will get going." The taxi driver says from behind m.
"No. Don't leave. Just give me two minutes." I say and he nods before walking back to the car. I turn my teary eyes back to Luis.
"Benedicta. I am sorry. I didn't mean all that. I just got so angry seeing you with him after you have been avoiding me for months" he tries to grab my hand but I move back, away from him.
"Don't touch me. I just came here to tell you, I am pregnant with your child. I thought maybe you would be of help but it is obvious you wouldn't. No need to worry, I will get rid of this problem myself." I say and walk back to the car, leaving Luis stun.

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Luis:

I watch Benedicta storm off and into that car which takes her away from me.
She's pregnant. Yes!!! I am going to have her forever. I do a little victory dance outside the house as I am overwhelm by the good news.
  We are going to be a very beautiful couple
"I would make you happy, Benedicta." I say to myself.

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. This is good news. I have to tell Lucas. I quickly go back inside the house and find my phone.
"Hello" Lucas voice sounds a bit down but I ignore it.
"Guess what?"I ask him. He doesn't answer for a while so I continue.
"You are going to be an uncle, bro" I break the news but my ears are only met with silence.
"Lucas? Ain't you happy for me? I knew it! You like her. That's why you left earlier to port Harcourt." I spit out.
"What are you talking about?" He dares try to play dumb?
"Listen, Lucas I own Benedicta now because she is carrying my child" I grind out then end the call. What a betrayer. He should be happy for me but no, he wants my woman.
  I already own her now. She is going to be begging me to accept her soon.
My mind goes back to her ranting that she would get rid of the problem herself.
No no no no. She can't mean my baby is the problem. What if she gets an abortion? I can't let that happen.
  My genius mind provide me with a nice solution to protect my baby and I quickly put it into action.
  I take a cab to benedicta's church and I am able to deceive the secretary of the pastor to get the pastor's number and I send a short message to him.

YOUR DAUGHTER IS PREGNANT. I ADVICE YOU GET HER TO THE LAB FOR TESTS BEFORW SHE DOES SOMETHING STUPID.

I hit send and grin at my screen.
"I am sorry Benedicta but you belong with me."

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  • Racheal Rakel Namz picture
    Racheal Rakel Namz
    What kind of love is that....uh mom thanks julie#first time commenting and first to comments
  • Racheal Rakel Namz picture
    Racheal Rakel Namz
    What kind of love is that....uh mom thanks julie#first time commenting and first to comments
  • Adeoti Akindele picture
    Adeoti Akindele
    This Luis guy is just soo stupidly possessive, Bennie u are in for a hard time ur secret is opened. First to comment Juliet weldone bae
  • Godiya Wisdom picture
    Godiya Wisdom
    That guy is a physco..
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    Thanks for the comment rachael
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    Thank you adeoti
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    A twisted psycho e is @ godiya wisdom.
  • Roselyn Ndukwu picture
    Roselyn Ndukwu
    This Luis na wa for u. Its only God that owns a person. Haba
  • eliza picture
    eliza
    u see Juliet I don't entirely blame Luis. if Benedicta's dad had sat her down and explained to her the ways if life she would have known how to handle such situation. her dad and brothers are over protective and strict her on instead of making her comfortable around them enough to tell them about her issues. but no,when she does a little mistake her father grounded her. and so when the first guy which us Luis shows her a little affection,being so naive she jumps at him first thing. there's more to life than going to church and reading the Bible. her father should have a taught her how to impact the words of the Bible in her life. but he's always so concerned about his image and the church's image.
  • Eunice Iyanu picture
    Eunice Iyanu
    I can't blame Bennie though, she just allowed herself to be drawn in the ocean of affection from a "psycho". I hope she learns and matures quickly sha
  • prisca chiwendu picture
    prisca chiwendu
    sheer wickedness. Luis is so disgusting. I pray he gets a taste of his own medicine. what nonsense to if he mistakenly gets married to Bennie he will practically make her a prisoner. Jules please don't let day happen
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    yea. some parents are just too religious but the bible said we should be heaven conscious and earthly wise. nice one babe.
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    let's watch n see prisca
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    I hope so too Eunice.
  • prisca chiwendu picture
    prisca chiwendu
    that happen*
  • Cutedreamer picture
    Cutedreamer
    I hate him. See how he put her into trouble. Is that love? He should be locked up in an asylum and have his he'd checked
  • eliza picture
    eliza
    I pray she doesn't succumb. being pregnant isn't the ticket to marriage. she should stand her ground and be a single mother if possible
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    lol @ cutedreamer
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    being a single mother isn't easy
  • Favour Abhatue picture
    Favour Abhatue
    Being a single mother isn't easy but she can't certainly be with that guy called Luis. Yeah, d mistake has been made but its not the end of d world. Geez, I hate this guy called Luis
  • eliza picture
    eliza
    I know Juliet. but it's far better than being tied down to that stupid manipulative psycho. for once i wish Lucas comes to her rescue
  • Ukbaby picture
    Ukbaby
    Luis of a guy is so manipulative and sick in d kidney... Cos he has a lot of shits stores up in his system... I feel like strangling him right now!
  • Mavis Siaw picture
    Mavis Siaw
    Dis Luis guy is really sick in the head ooo
  • Confy-Dencie picture
    Confy-Dencie
    Luis is a fucking annoying he-goat. Benedicta doesn't belong to him and will never belong to him. He can go ahead and hug a moving train.. Which kind stupid love
  • Confy-Dencie picture
    Confy-Dencie
    Haaa,I wish dia will be a mistake in dat number, or network will just disconnect d msg, so dat it won't get delivered to Bennie's dad
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    Lol this kind of message never gets hanged. It sends smoothly @ confy
  • Mery Ezinne Okoro picture
    Mery Ezinne Okoro
    Nawaooo.... Is this love or what? What kind of love doesn't care about the feeling of ur partner? Am beginning to doubt d authenticity of the pills he bought for her after d affair, poor Bennie!!! But can such an over protective jealous guy make a good husband ? Juliet abeg ooo free us from this suspense
  • eliza picture
    eliza
    @Confy-Dencie he should go and hug a transformer instead so that it will shock him. msteww goat!
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    Lol Eliza n confidence won't kee me with laugh. Plotting Luis's death.
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    Next episode soon mery
  • Ronke Adetula picture
    Ronke Adetula
    Yeeeepa, she is dead. This will be the reaction of the father: "Ha Benedicta has killed me, how do I face my congregation, I disown you. Juliet, next please, but I pity her and my Lucas
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    Ronke Adetula
    Yeeeepa, she is dead. This will be the reaction of the father: "Ha Benedicta has killed me, how do I face my congregation, I disown you. Juliet, next please, but I pity her and my Lucas
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    lol. Ronke has hit the nail on d head
  • Benedicta Osei Arhin picture
    Benedicta Osei Arhin
    What! What a mess! Luis has killed me oh, is this what love is? Is this the love the Bible said in 1Corin 13? Oh No! I wish Benny's mum was alive, at least it would have helped in her up bringing, abeg babe pls send the next episode
  • Faustina Afaribea picture
    Faustina Afaribea
    I have this Luis guy. What kind of love is that. Bennie would rather hate him when she finds out what he has done.
  • Faustina Afaribea picture
    Faustina Afaribea
    I hate this Luis guy. Mtweeew. He is so annoying. Can I get his number so that I can tell him my piece of mind. Lol
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    lol Faustina do you want him to fall on love with you too?
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    I don't think Luis reads the bible Benedicta. go home and face your father. next episode would be tomorrow tho. I have serious headache
  • Benedicta Osei Arhin picture
    Benedicta Osei Arhin
    Sorry dear, get some pain killers
  • Tumininu Odunlami picture
    Tumininu Odunlami
    Luis is too possesive
  • Betty Orah picture
    Betty Orah
    Dis guy x be coming devilish ohh. Any way nice one!
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    Thank you betty
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    Thanks benedicta. I feel much better now. Would upload soon
  • Zainab Mohammed picture
    Zainab Mohammed
    I don't pity Bennie a bit. Let her carry her cross alone.
  • Pamela cube picture
    Pamela cube
    This guy is really sick in the head.
  • Orji Christiana picture
    Orji Christiana
    Benny I feel ur pains but God will see u tru
  • Maryam Ali picture
    Maryam Ali
    And what abt those pills she took after sex,weren't they suppose to prevent being pregnant or what!
  • Lo is picture
    Lo is
    The pills were fake Ali n the baby should just miscarriage
  • Itz Rude picture
    Itz Rude
    If I should catch this Luis I will squeeze sense to his head. Nice one Juliet?
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