Broken-Broken - Episode 30

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EPILOGUE

“Francis, don’t play with mummy’s sketches.” Lawrence shouted at their three year old boy. (which was adopted)

The little boy quickly dropped the papers and grinned at his father…

Just then a phone began to ring…

“Baby, your phone is ringing.”

“I’m coming.” Scarlett replied, now coming out of the room, heavily pregnant. She had a hand on a baby bump and she slowly but carefully walked to sit beside her husband. Who was going through their wedding pictures.

“Careful darling.” He said, assisting her to sit, before giving her the phone.

“Hello, yea, okay. I will call someone to handle that.” Then she ended the call.

“Who was that?” Lawrence asked.

“It’s my office at Dubai, we just got a partnership with Gucci directly.”

“Wow! That is such a good news. Congrats baby.” He said, kissing her while the little boy threw a pillow at them.

“See this boy o..you don’t want daddy to kiss mummy?”

The boy nodded but Lawrence playfully ran to him and carried him on his laps, tickling him while he laughed excitedly.

Then he stopped and was looking at Scarlett’s tommy.

“Tistar.”

“Yes son, you are going to have a little sister very soon.” Lawrence said, placing a hand on the baby bump.

“How is my little princess?”

“Oh she’s fine, she’s been kicking me since morning.” Scarlett replied, now kissing her husband.

“Look how far we ‘ve come baby…God has been kind to us. We adopted Francis and now we are having our own baby.”

“Yea, God has been nothing but kind, please increase the volume of that song..Francis come, let’s dance.”

The little boy jumped from his father’s laps and began to dance with his father as the music played on…..
 

                                 I'm so glad we made it
                                  Look how far we've come my baby
                                        We mighta took the long way
                                     We knew we'd get there someday.......

THE END

Thanks so much for being part of this story Guys! God bless you ! Remember, in every disappointment, there is always a blessing. whatever you are going through today which is breaking your heart is just preparing you for a greater joy to come! Be hopeful, be positive. it's just a matter of time. Everything will just be fine...after the storm comes the RAINBOW. I LOVE YOU!

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  • daragoldy16@gmail.com picture
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    love you too u finishing word really lifted my soul. thanks
  • Medina Lawal picture
    Medina Lawal
    Wow, what a happy ending! Tobi I hope it won't take long before seeing you again?
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    Tobi Loba
    lol@Medina, i hope so
  • Emash picture
    Emash
    thanks Tobi! you have encourage me with your last words. what doesn't break you makes you stronger.
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    Emash
    *encouraged
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    Nicol Zion
    God bless u So interesting
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    Judith Ankomah
    Thanks Tobi.may God give you more wisdom
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    Ajani Joy
    I must really commend you for a job well done....This is super amazing... I love everything about the story.. Weldone ma'am and thumbs up.
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    Wadikom
    Love U too, thanks.
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    Ameh juliet
    awn thanks Tobi. As usual, this is a work of art .kudos
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    Adenike
    Thank u darling.abt d plagiarism.i saw wen a woman want on mending heart on Facebook and I was like wawu Tobi never tell us she's everywhere I got a very shut up reply thou.bt u can check mending heart on facebook
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    Tobi Loba
    WOW@Adenike, thanks for that
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    Chinenye Innocent
    Thank you very much i really enjoyed the story.
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    dat writer on mending hearts is breaking hearts instead. I just saw it
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    Popoola Elizabeth
    Wao am touch, Tobi more ink in your pen
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    Brenda
    I love u more Tobi.I actually saw ur story(when a man wants) in a group on Facebook and I reported it to ebony stories on WhatsApp and I'm glad to say that was the end of that copy cat
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    Brenda
    So pls don't stop writing bcos of the bad one's within us okay, we will be vigilant and gradually separate the weed from the shafts
  • Mauray Anyanwu picture
    Mauray Anyanwu
    Muah to you Tobi. Your piece is usually inspiring. I love you to the moon and back. God bless you real good
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    EnkayDee
    Thanks Tobi, u sure outdid yourself this time. I enjoyed all the episodes. Free those bad belles that are copying your work, like you wrote God is the best avenger. No one would reap your labor.
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks guys...ebonystory has handled that nonsense mending hearts...they ve pulled my stories down...you guys are my eyes and ears. @Brenda thanks so much
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen@EnkayDee, thank you
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    Tobi Loba
    Please when you see my stories elsewhere, i didnt post it, i only write on Ebonystory, kindly alert ebonystory, thank you....and yea, i will keep writing
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    Adeoti Akindele
    Hmmmm! At last seems as if d story shouldnt end, when there is life, there is hope never give up. @Tobi u really make d story real and alive, ur ink will never run dry, love u dear keep d flag flying! Love to read from u soon.
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    Oluwadare Mojisola
    Tobi you are always the bomb! Kisses
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    Lilly Nabz
    Wooow I love this. Keep it up..it blows my mind
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks and Amen@Adeoti, awww@Moji, thanks sis
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    Tobi Loba
    @Lilly, been expecting you,,,thank you,@Juliet, Wadikom, Joy, zelizabeth
  • Olaleye Adedamola picture
    Olaleye Adedamola
    Finally will came to end of d story...when there is life hope is dey in every situation will btw our self...Great job Tobi, thank so much for d story,, God will given u wisdom and understanding..... I always love ur story.. We are expected u again Tobi pls don't staying long for another bomb another fantastic.
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    Jacob Toluwanimi
    Love you too noona... More blessing, More inspiration, More knowledge, More strength darling... Will be expecting the next story... The queen
  • Eunice Iyanu picture
    Eunice Iyanu
    Well done sis. You are a good writer I must say. Looking forward to reading more
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    Ruth Karanja
    At last we have come 2 an end...am in love with ur stories Tobi...God bless ur labor & don't give up please...waiting 4 the next bomb story
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    Fabian Ibeh
    Tobi I'm going to miss your stories if you decide to stop. You are intelligent and its very attractive...to me. Too bad you already have some1, could've tried my luck...Lol. Anyways just post one more b4 quitting. Thanks *smiles*
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    Damilare Ayokunnu Ayodele
    Wow wow wow What a glorious ending to a wonderful story by my outstanding writer.. God bless the work of your hand dear. I decree and declare that your source of inspiration will never run dry IJN... Great message left to us by our wonder writer is "Don't Give Up. Thank God I didn't give up on myself at fifth attempt of my O'level and 3rd attempt of my Jamb, I wouldn't have been a graduate today and best student in my department... Love you plenty my sis. Expecting you soon dear.
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    Marveyc Chuks
    I was really hoping to be d first to comment when d story ends lol.. Tobi!!! Girl u rock. Ur novels r like bomb nd am soo into it. More inspirations nd no writers block.. U sure deserve some accolade kisses. Looking forward to ur next book. Am ur number one fan actually #smiles#
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    Tobi Loba
    lol, Thanks MA@Mrs Olaleye, Jacob, Eunice and Ruth
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    Tobi Loba
    LoolS@Fabian, you wont stop cracking me up.Thanks so much@Mr Dammy, Amen,sorry i missed your call, was asleep
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    Tobi Loba
    loools@Marvey, my number 1 Fan, thanks a lot
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    Faith Omonkhodion
    Lovelllyyyy. love you too Tobi. ad thanks for those last words of encouragement. more ink to ur pen. ad pls don't stop writing. muuaahh
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    Tobi Loba
    lol, thanks,, double muah
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks ma
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    Irene Avworo
    Wow, you have outdone yourself again, you are without mincing words the BEST. More Grace and Inspiration Tobi dear, highly anticipating your next work. Loads of love and kisses
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    Patience Peter
    Very interesting story. May God bless u Tobi.
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    Favour Abhatue
    This was really awesome Tobi, God bless u so richly.
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    Ojonoka Hannah
    Thanks Tobi,it was really an interesting story. God will continue to give u more wisdom to write.
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    Imy Jackson
    Thank you so much for this amazing story,i love you too
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    Favour Abhatue
    Pls don't stop Tobi, I will really miss u if u do. More ink to ur pen
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    Godiya Wisdom
    Wao, woa! God bless you Tobi, I was really inspired
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    Ngozi Awagu
    Thanks Tobi my super writer,I love your stories, if anybody tampers with your work again, fire go decend on such
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    Uwem Udoh
    Woowu! Tobi you are no doubt the best,thanks for the change of mind to continue writing...God bless you with more wisdom and grace to write...i look forward to reading your next story...love you always.
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much everyone
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    Mary glo
    You are the best. Thanks for making me smile with ur stories. I await another bomb from u.
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    Itiveh Joy
    Thanks lv...lv u too Once again u v outdone ursf
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    Benedicta Osei Arhin
    Great story my dear, but pls for the love of your readers, then stop writing, God bless and increase you in all your endeavours. We love you. Looking forward to a new story soon.
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    Benedicta Osei Arhin
    *don't stop writing* i meant
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    Celestina Oranye
    WE LOVE U TOOOO
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    Tobi Loba
    Lmao@Benedicta, yes ma
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    Bigails
    aww felt like crying...we love you too, keep it up dear
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    chisom Julia
    Thanks for the work and keep on writing and don't let what people do discourage you. Keep soaring higher bae
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    Zenith
    You always got me longing for the next episode. Thumbs up to you. You are a talent
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    Opeoluwa
    You are always my number one writer on Ebonystory
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    Opeoluwa
    You are always my number one writer on Ebonystory
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    Precious jewel
    Swt tobi loba! Always on point more ink to ur elbow v
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    Tobi Loba
    Awww@Precious,Zenith, Chisom Opeoluwa..thanks fam.
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    simon chege
    Tobi Tobi,,,, dont give up always there must be a mad idiot in a market who dont knw how it goes wen planting en the tiresam work it calls bt he bends over to leap on others sweat,,, shame shame,,, anyway thanks we kenyan we appreciate 4 the visit,,, karibuni tena tunawapenda sana (welcome again we love you alot) .#@Ruth Karanja#
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    Tobi Loba
    loool...thanks for the translation..i really needed...thanks so much
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    shittumariam
    you always make me happy with your story. More knowledge and am expecting your new job
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    Tobi Loba
    lol,yes ma'am, thank you
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    Blessing Emmanuel
    I love you Tobi!,phew! What an awesome story. More ink ,more knowledge ,bigger you i pray!.
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks alot
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    Shanteljen
    OK I have been emotionally down of late but this story has really lifted my spirit. Nice work Tobi. You did well
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    Pamela Essien
    Nice work. Really a great piece. Kudos dear
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    Mercy Ezigbo
    A very inspiring story with an awesome endnote, I just can't stop reading your works, thanks for this story. As to those copying your works, they can only try but can never be you, you are the ORIGINAL, so don't kill your passion bcos of a bunch of dream killers like those copycats, karma awaits them just the way it did Scarlet's mom.
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much mas
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    Opara Emmanuella Ifeoma
    Super dearie, just like always!
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    Ukbaby
    I love you too... I really needed this story to move on and forgive those that have really broken me... God bless you Tobiloba.... I'm also blessed with a man that has wiped my tears away.. Would be getting married to him very soon.
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    Tobi Loba
    wow@Uk baby...i am so happy for you
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    Rebecca Albert
    This is so lovely I have not made any comments. But sincerely you Deserve more than just a comment for this lovely piece. I love those aspect where they kissed it was so bonding. Thanks so much. Please permit me to share on a women facebook group
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks Mrs Rebecca but its not allowed, Ebonystory will take it down, sorry
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    Rebecca Albert
    Okay MA. I will
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    Abbey remmy
    Awesome n captivating.looking forward to another fantastic Tobiloba???
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    Tobi Loba
    AWW, thanks @Abbey
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    Becadon
    Bby thats 1 hell of a story got me emotional dats a masterpiece chin chin for u with cold zobo take am sama body
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    Becadon
    Dats 1 hell of a story baby you got me emotional u ave a masterpiece dear ride on i dae ur back gidigba go slap mopol army and anybody
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    Tobi Loba
    hahahaha, hehe, thanks for the imaginry zobo@Becadon
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    spicy
    If it's not Tobi.. it's not making sense
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    Tobi Loba
    [email protected] spicing my head up
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    Adetoun Oyindamola
    Wow!. What a happy end....more ink to your pen.
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    Tobi Loba
    AMen, thanks
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    anuoluwapo
    wow.more grease to your elbow
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks sis
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    ezinne oruche
    Wow! Wow!! Wow!!! Tobi, you are in a class of your own, kudos.
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    Ab Jacobs
    Wow!!! Beautiful story with a beautiful ending!.got me glued to my phone since afternoon.May God bless you and give u more inspiration.
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    Alice Funmilayo
    Wow! Tobi you've doneir again. Your stories keeps me glue to my phone like a super glue. Thumbs up!!!! You a indeed a great writer
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks so much sisters
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    Kosmas Inegbenijie
    Lovely story, i almost cried, weldone author.
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks Kosmas
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    Vivian Chime
    Tobi dear.... Well done, I always enjoy your stories and everything, they're really awesome and this, this is so sweet and lovely... More grace dear, more grace
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks sis, really appreciate
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    Alhaji Bello
    Thanks dear I really enjoyed the story ,may God keep strengthening yoy
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks Alhaji
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    Iwu Victoria
    You are just too awesome sis, I enjoyed the story all the way, keep up the good work.
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks sis
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    Mma Obi
    I love you Tobi. You kept me glued to my screen till the end. I am your fan . Keep doing the good work.
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much Mma, im grateful
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    Adiebara Asawo-Fila
    May God continue to bless and increase you in Jesus Name, Amen. This story was really encouraging and life transforming. You're indeed gifted. Thanks so much for using your gift very well.
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks so much ma@Adiebare
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    Oluwafolakemi Adegboye
    Good works.. God bless you sis
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    mercy Tsala
    Nice story and a page turner. Beautiful ending.... Kudos to you Tobi, I hope ur books are on Amazon??..u deserve to be there o!!
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    Isioma Saliu
    Tobi I doff my hat for the kind of skill and intelligence with which you tell your story, you are just wow!!!! God bless you real good. More ideas ooh in Jesus name. Nice and interesting story. Thumbs up.
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much everyone
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    Yusuf Tairat
    Beautiful ending,Gos bless you
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    Tobi Loba
    Thank you
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    linda wolobah
    Thank you so much Tobi Loba I really enjoyed the story
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    Awwwwnnnnn...... thank you so much ma'am Tobi Loba.... the story was a really nice one.... more grease to ur elbow
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    Tobi Loba
    @Linda and Mercybae,im glad, you are welcome
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    Olorunlekeyemisi
    Wow,u her gifted babe.
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    Oge Zeras
    Wow thumb up Tobi, its an amazing story
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    Oge Zeras
    Wow thumb up Tobi, its an amazing story
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    Pretty Princess Uche
    What can I say that have not been said?? You are gifted.
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    Amaka Nnodu
    Thanks dear I really enjoyed the lovely story ,may God keep strengthen you.
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks sis
  • Tofunmi Damilolayo picture
    Tofunmi Damilolayo
    Hummm,interesting story.I have learnt a lesson from d story. Kudos to d writer
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    Vivian Okoli
    Thanks dear, your story is very inspiring and soul lifting. You have done a great job. Kudos
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much @Tofunmi and Vivian, i am glad
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    Samuel Igwe
    Indeed! Inspiring
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    Ngozi Sylvia
    May God give u more inspiration to write more and more.
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks ma
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    Salmon Bolanle
    I love it more wisdom ijn
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen,thanks alot
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    Itz Treasure
    I love dat keep it up...... D sky is ur starting point dear
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen thanks@its Treasure
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    Usman Abdulsalam Ganiyat
    Amen, may Almighty Allah increase urwisdom and knowledge and everyone read ur story we really enjoy it keep it up.
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks ma
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    Happy Godfirst
    Thank you so much Tobi you're wonderful & gifted you will grow higher & higher your greatness will be manifest in Jesus name Amen
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    OtseDavid
    Wow nice one Tobi if you could see me right now you would see am giving a standing ovation to you. its been a while I read on ebonystory and this was one hell of a way to return I wish I could have half your gift. Kudos
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much sis@Happy
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    Bulus Esther Kwando
    Very true... "What doesn't break us only gets broken". Nice piece Tobi , you nailed it!
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks so much@Bulus
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    fmjose
    tobi u ar too much,kudos to u plz notify me anytime u drop another story
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    Tobi Loba
    lol@Fmjose, no problem, thank you
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    Ogunbanwo Abimbola
    I really love this....this is my first time of reading your story,i was bored and I decided to look online for stories and I stumbled on this. You are inspirational and I love that..... Please don't stop what you do, it is one's handwork takes one to great places. Kudos to you
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    Confy-Dencie
    Great story,,,there is always light at the end of every tunnel. kudos to u for dis beautiful story
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    Suzzy Tim
    Wow,,,,, thank you very much....!
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much sis@Abimbola, Confy and Suzzy
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    Gift Maduakor
    wow... thanks so very much.. I love this one very well. winks
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks Gift
  • Sally Omonor Igbanor picture
    Sally Omonor Igbanor
    Tobi, you are indeed a great writer. I stayed glue to my phone reading to the end. You are truly a great
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    Ogunmoyin Hormorneeycrown
    Such an amazing story God bless you abundantly
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    Balogun Oluwaseyi Balogun
    Nice. I can't remember when last something captivated me Such a beautiful work
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    Tobi Loba
    Awwwm thanks Balogun
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    Tobi Loba
    @sallee and Omonicrown, thank you
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    Omo-ikhile onyeka Emmanuella
    Ur story kept me glued to my phone wanting to know what happens next n yet not wanting it to end. U just made me ur number 1 fan. Nice one dear
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    Tobi Loba
    Lool, thanks omo
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    chomyline
    tobi darling i totally enjoyed this story may you never lack ideals keep it going darling!
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    Oluwadebie
    wow. Tobiloba kudos to you dearie. I do love your stories
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    Tobi Loba
    Awww, thanks@Chomyline and Oluwadebie, I appreciate those comments
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    Betty Godwin
    Thanks Tobi...you kept me awake all through the night with ur story....u are the best. I so much love what u do.....thanks for making my day
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    chijay
    Wow ! Tobi, u r so so talented . Intriguing story from beginning to ending. Any one copying ur work will never succeed. More grace n inspirations to u.
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    Tobi Loba
    lolss, thanks Betty and Chijay
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    Adeniyi Titilope
    You are so making a difference scion. Please consider writing for the movies. Break a leg always.
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    Tobi Loba
    Hmm, thanks so much
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    Becky Johnson
    You are the best Tobi More grease
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    Becky Johnson
    You are the best Tobi More grease
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks Becky
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    DelightsomeSarah Jedidah-AnnieMcphie
    Thanks a lot Tobi. Made my salon visit less boring. Read all episodes while waiting to get my hair done
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    Olawale Agbojo
    Awesome, interesting, what a masterpiece! Good write up tobi loba. U deserve some accolades
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    Olawale Agbojo
    I'm sharing
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    Francisca Joseph
    Very interesting and inspiring Nyc one Tobi Tag me in ur stories (love reading Story/novels)
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks so much @Olawale and Fransica
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    Maame Bonsu
    Waawoo u really make my day.God richly bless u for ur good work
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    Sarah Obi-ogwah
    There are rainbows ? indeed. Tobi Loba the sky is your steeping stone #solidlybehindyou
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    Tobi Loba
    Aww, thanks Maame. Thanks Sarahm please stop crying o lol
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    Damilola Edun
    Wow! wat a lovely& emotional story. I must confess I really enjoyed dis story,being the first tym reading ur story & comment. May God give u more knowledge & understanding, wisdom.bcus I can wait to read more of ur story. To be sincere u're too much I love u...
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    Ovwigho Mary
    I enjoyed every bit of the story, thank you??????
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    Tobi Loba
    Wow, Amen. Thanks so much@Damilola Edun and Mary
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    Gloria Osas Oamen
    Wow! I enjoyed myself immensely. Keep up the good work girl
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much@Gloria
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    Berenys Sedina
    Wow!Tobi, you are so good. This is my first story and I enjoyed every bit of it. Keep it up.
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    Tobi Loba
    Awwm thanks so much Sedina
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    Mariam Nasser
    Well..i personally dont know writing is your passion or professional thing But me as a novel reader u need to add emotion in your characters...the story was supposed to be emotion catching and fun..i believe it was supposed to make me cry at some level...anyway good work
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    Mercy Ope-jah Ajala
    Love the storyline. Kudos to you!
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    Eddu Faith
    Love the ending of it all. Tanks for making my evening..
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    Shirley Adeshina
    Wow,well-done! Once I started found it difficult to stop .read All the episodes within two days and charging batteries and switching fines.had a blast.thumbs up to you dearie.
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    Tobi Loba
    Lool thanks so much @Shirley, Eddu, Faith and Mariam
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    Nexy Berry
    I've been so motivated in my spirit tank u for dis story u've reminded me dat dere is still hope 10x a million
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    Tobi Loba
    I'm happy Nexy
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    Leticia Fidash
    Wow...thanx tobi. You really are a genus
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    Adebayo Solomon
    Beautiful one.. I just started following your stories and I enjoy them really.. You're an amazing talent.
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    Tobi Loba
    Wow, thanks Leticia and Solomon
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    Kenny Fatusi
    Wow wow wow Wat a great story I just started following ur stories nd I really enjoy them Splendid work writer
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    Ola Mide
    Nice story.. #winks#
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much @Kenny and Mide
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    Abaya Cordelia Angel
    this is just wow. more grace dear
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    Arawumi Anuoluwapo
    U really did a great job God bless ur works
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    Assibi Georgina
    Awwwww I enjoyed this story from beginning to the end. God bless you Tobi. The story is educative
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much@Aanu, Angel and Georgina
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    Paradise pearl
    And they live happily ever after, i just love this last episode.
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    Pamela cube
    One word.......splendid
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    Jane Louw
    Happy ending,keep up the good work n writting love you more??
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    Ileomon Destiny
    I really love your stories Tobi. nice.
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    Ezekiel Shausu
    Thank soo much TOBI i really enjoyed the story.......
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    festus wisdom
    Omg.. Have always enjoy your stories.. Love you plenty plenty
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    Grace Weah
    Wow....so sweet I really appreciate you for this wonderful story. May God continue to bless you and give you more wisdom amen.
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    Theophilus Chia
    Story was awesome ???
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    Glory kufre etim
    This story is so touching, and it makes me cry...
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    Abosede Ikeoluwa
    Well done,more Grace
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    Oluwasufficient Olamide
    May God sama you with blessing. Although I never knew the story was yours because I started reading it on a Facebook page named "Feargod Prince". You can check it out. God bless you
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    Yettymoliq
    Mind blowing, more grease dear
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    Yettymoliq
    Mind blowing, more grease dear
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    Frederick
    Bravo. You have really inspired me, Thanks.
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    Ciara Jessy
    Oh, my gosh. See comments. Baba, when will my own come? We love you, Tonight.
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    Miracle
    Wow! Nice one love the ending
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    Alexander De Great
    thanks for your encouraging story and motivation at same time may GOD give you more wisdom
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    Olorundiya Ayomide
    Dear Tobi, May the Lord God bless the work of your hands. May He increase you in all ramifications of your life. Your story actually gave me hope and puts me together. Thank you for writing as I'm definitely gonna read more of your books . Reading your story for the first time and I fell in love with your intelligence. You have a big fan right here.. God bless you
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