Broken-Broken - Episode 29

To err and to forgive

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Guys, I regret to say I may not be writing anymore…As much as I love writing here and reading those comments, its not encouraging when some people just decide to copy and paste my work on another site without my consent..it is really not fair when i take time to sit, think and write and someone just go do copy and paste under another name to make it look like their work. Please guys, if you see any of my work somewhere apart from ebonystory, kindly notify the number on the ebonysite or our facebook messenger or send a message to me privately . It’s just not good enough and I feel bad seriously. Plagiarism is an offense and I love what I do, nobody has a right to it except me.

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Okay where were we self….this thing is just painful, I can’t even remember what I wanted to write.

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NIGERIA

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When we got to the house, I was surprised I couldn’t see a single car in sight. It looked so abandoned and the painting was washed out.

“Are you sure your mum still stays here?” Lawrence asked.

“Well, the detective said she still does so I believe she does.” I replied.

We walked to the entrance which looked as if it hasn’t been swept in a month. There were cobwebs everywhere

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. I remembered how I had always kept the house sparklingly clean. Mother never wanted to sight even the slightest dust. Now, it was like a heap of dirt. I was being careful so as not to get my Versace shirt and trousers stained.

“Should I ring the bell?” Lawrence asked.

“Hold on.” I replied. Walking to the window and I tried to peep, to see if I could see anything.

“Maybe you should ring the bell, I can’t see anyone.” I said.

Lawrence went ahead and pressed his thumb against the door bell.

It rang for a while-silence greeted us.

We exchanged glances and he pressed it again.

Still no sound then I decided to try the door which surprisingly opened.

I looked at him and he gave me a go ahead.

The house smelt the same, as we got in…memories of the day Francis died flooded back…I could see the place where he had laid, bleeding.

The whole house was dirty…but I could hear a movement….

“Who is there?” A voice asked from my room.

I hesitated, who could be living there.

I could hear the sound of something being wheeled and I waited to see who it was….sitting in the wheel chair was someone looking very old and very haggard- with one open eye while the other was closed, in her hand was a staff.

“Who is there?” She asked, looking at us with the one eye.

Lawrence looked at me and then at the woman-“Baby who is she.”

“That’s’s….that’s my mother.” I replied, without a single bit of pity in me.

“oh my God! Scar…Scar is that you….I mean Scarlett….?”

I smiled, so she has heard the story of my fame…Lawrence came closer to me, holding me by the waist…

“Are you okay?” He asked.

“Sure, this woman is not worth a single drop of my tear.”

Mother looked sober.

“I am so sorry my daughter, please forgive me. I did so many wrong things….I destroyed you….” She was sobbing now and stretching her hands towards me but I backed away.

“You didn’t destroy me mother, you made me a star, inspite of what you did…I turned out greater than you would ever be!”

“I know. God has dealt with me and punished me.

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. Every day I wait and hope you would come home and forgive me.”

“What of Honorable, where is he?”

“He died last year, died of pelvic cancer after lung failure.”

Lawrence tightened his grip around me and whispered.
“You see, our God is a god of justice. He has already avenged you.”

I smiled and nodded, now choking back tears of ….i don’t know.

“What of mama Zainab? Where is she? I need to see her.”

“She..she is still at her old place…” Mother replied.

“Okay, I will go see her.” I replied and t hen squatted beside her.

“You broke me mother, but God lifted me , He has avenged me and there is no reason to be angry with you. This is my fiancé, we are getting married in the next two days, I met him as a result of Francis’ death. If you hadn’t lied against me, we would never have met. Now I realized, everything you did to break me , made me. Therefore mother, I forgive you with all my heart.” With this, I stood up, she was still crying but I said nothing  as I left the house with my fiancé.

While I got outside, I sighed and embraced Lawrence, who held me tightly.

“You did well darling and I’m proud of you.”

We later went to Mama Zainab’s house, she couldn’t recognize me but I explained myself, she was so excited. She prayed for me and Lawrence, then I gave her some money to start a trade with.

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Some minutes after, I was waiting in our car, watching what was going on with Lawrence and Dafina. He had called her to meet him so he could apologise and explain in person. I was surprised when I saw her slap Lawrence as she got close to him, I just laughed.

Later they continued to talk and for a while, I felt sorry for her, she was in tears… then they later embraced before she left in the car that had brought her.

“What did she say?” I asked after he got back into the car, rubbing his cheek.

“She said she saw me when I kissed you at the hotel and she wanted to see how long I was willing to keep the secret from her. slapped me …as you could see and which I could tell you enjoyed seeing….”

I laughed and rubbed his cheek as he continued-

“….but she said she understood I dint love her and she was happy she wasn’t going to marry someone who wouldn’t love her. Later she thanked me for being honest and that was that.”

“Well, thank God, is there anything else we wanto do here?” He asked and I shook my head.

“So we are free to leave this country for good ?”

I nodded.

“Well then, are you ready to become Mrs Lawrence ?”

I smiled and put on my glasses before turning to face him.

‘I am ready when you are!”

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  • daragoldy16@gmail.com picture
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    May God reward the work of your hands and punish those people copying your work. stay blessed
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks sis
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    Boluwatife
    Dats devlish! Keep going gal. D sky is the limit
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    Jacob Toluwanimi
    I love u babe...
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    Damilare Ayokunnu Ayodele
    That is really bad, don't worry Oluwatobiloba, God will vindicate You and give You victories over your enemies. Please, don't relent dear, don't be depressed and never give up on your dreams dear Oluwatobiloba. Remember, we all your fans love you so much. It is time for God to announce You Himself. As from now henceforth sky shall no longer be your limit but rather it shall be your stepping stone to Great and Extremely Success IJN. Much love dear Friend...
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    Tobi Loba
    lol, Love you too@Jacob
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen ooo@Mr Dammy, thank you so much for those wonderful prayers
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    Irene Avworo
    Without you Ebonystory will just be story without the Ebony, you are without a doubt the best writer here, I always look forward to your work, please don't stop writing please. God will surely reward and bless you and you will reap the fruit of your labour.. More Grace and Inspiration Tobi dear, loads of love and kisses
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    Tobi Loba
    hmmm...thanks a lot Ma
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    Patience Peter
    Interesting story. Tobi please don't stop writing. God will reward the works of ur hands. I love reading ur stories so much pleasssse
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    Uwem Udoh
    Awwwn Tobi pls dont stop na....they'll all get wats coming to them for coping ur works and God will continue to bless the works of your hands....big hugs dear.
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks sisters
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    mercy christopher
    Please dont, you are the reason i still read ebonystory
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    Tobi Loba
    Aww, thanks sis
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    shittumariam
    I can see love in the air
  • Kehinde Temitope Odunukan Adeboye picture
    Kehinde Temitope Odunukan Adeboye
    Tobi dear,God bless your wisdom thanks for the puttingup a story like dis its gives Hope.....thou the sorrow may last for a night but Joy comes in the morning God bless your wisdom more and more...thumbup
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    Tobi Loba
    Aww...exactly ma, thank you ma and Amen
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    spicy
    Already-made lady.. if e come my way I swear no hesitation
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    Alarezomo Ivie Sandra
    You are such a great person...and your stories have a way of lifting up one's soul....Thank you!
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    Tobi Loba
    hmmm, im so glad
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    Chinyere Duruoha
    Tobi you are the best
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    Tobi Loba
    Awwww, thanks sis@Chinyere
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    Ebubechukwu Venalynda
    Actually I got to know about ebony story because someone was posting a story from here in a facebook group page.
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks a lot@Ebubechukwu.... did the person send the link along with the story?
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    Ogochukwu Daniel
    Every hand that'll copy, paste without permission... May his or her phone be copied and pasted out of their possession IJN Amen Lobbish!!
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    Tobi Loba
    hahahah, I love that
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    chijay
    Tobi baby, don't break my heart by taking to brain wht is happening n stop ur brillient work. keep it coming, whosoever that is copying ur work will be exposed n disgraced . Love u plenty
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    Tobi Loba
    lol amen thanks chijay
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    Victoria Samuel
    Ur story r really touching Keep it up dear
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks Aishat and Victoria
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    samuelade.
    i think i saw something like this before but more twisted
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    Zainab Mohammed
    'Been crying from beginning to De end of De story. God bless you dear.
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    Tobi Loba
    Wow, thanks so much
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    Lin'Da Izunwanne
    Oh my God. Tobi make God bless u. In fact ur bangs must sell. Chia baby u are good oo
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    Mharey Ajayi
    I really enjoyed this story..... God will continue to strengthen the hand behind ebonystory
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks so much@Linda and Mharey
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    MaryJane Chi
    Ooo Tobi u made my day... It story gave me life and hope that I can still make it....u are a God sent, God bless u for me... Tnks soo much can't love u less...go girl!!!!
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    Tobi Loba
    Wow, Im glad
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    Juliana Julus
    More inspiration u are going places..
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    Justina
    May god reward the wrks of ur hands
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    Brenda Juliet
    You are so wonderful author, even if they copy your work, they can't be real you meaning they will have to hide behind you so you remain the lead
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