Broken-Broken - Episode 5
Taken
“And where do you two think you are going…?”
I could feel my heart beating so fast as if it was going to drop out of its socket.
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. Francis grabbed my arm, pulling me behind him while he confronted her….
“Mama…please….” He started but kept quiet as mother raised her head so fast and shot him an hostile glare…
“Mama…really?” She asked , now climbing down slowly, puffing the smoke from the ciga and still holding the gun at us.
“I knew you two coconut heads were up to something from the day I sighted you together on my birthday. I just didn’t think you would be stupid enough to continue with it. You both are so stupid, you didn’t even notice I left my phone in the sitting room when I went out, recording everything you were saying. That drink you thought you gave me, I poured it away fool.”
She walked closer and we backed away.
“You stupid boy. I gave you everything and you still preferred my daughter
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. That slut!”
“Mama..please, just let us go, you can deal with me but let Scarlet go….” Francis pleaded, now between me and mother. We were moving in circle, she kept coming closer with the gun and we kept backing away, slowly.
“Scarlett….there is nothing scarletty about that slut!” She was looking at me now. “I should have aborted you while I was still pregnant with you! If not that the doctor said it could kill me. You think I would have kept you alive! See what you did to my perfect figure! I had the perfect figure eight and now I lost that when I gave birth to you! I could never get that back. I dunno why I just hate you. You are a baggage…a problem..and now you are running away with my own boy! Its not too late to get rid of you.”
“She didn’t do anything to you Mama! Please let her go! That is the only way to get rid of her! You are not thinking straight, you are drunk, Put down the gun mama!”
“Move Francis, or I shoot you both together!”
I watched as Francis rushed to her, they were both struggling with the gun now and the ciga fell from her lips…
Should I run..should I stay…..
“Run Scarlet..run!” Francish shouted while panting and still struggling with mother…
I checked the door, the key was still there…I ran to it and began to turn the key with trembling hands , I looked back, they were now on the couch, still struggling with the gun…..
My heart was racing and I couldn’t get the door opened….just then there was a loud gun shot , which shook the entire building.
Everything stood till….i held my breath, afraid to look behind me….
Everywhere was quiet and I heard someone slump to the floor….
Using all my will power and still not breathing, I turned around….
Lying in the pool of blood was Francis…he had a hand to his chest and he was looking at me, while coughing blood….i forgot about my mother instantly.
“No…no..no…Francis!”
I felt the panic begin like a cluster of spark plugs in my abdomen…my heart was beginning to race like a rabbit trying to jump out of its skin as I watched him jerk…he was still looking at me…and trying to say something but suddenly , his face grew limp and he didn’t jerk or blink anymore.
It was like a hurricane starting from deep within me, shutting my brain out like a machine gun. I was immediately covered in sweat, I felt like my body was covered in another hot body like a bin bag and I knew I was going to explode.
I was crying like I have never cried before….my one chance to freedom is just gone…..i was still kneeling down and crying when I heard the door open and some men came beside me…my brain couldn’t register anything….
“That’s her officers, please take her away, she just shot her boyfriend.” I heard my mother say.
I felt hands grabbing me, I was too powerless to resist..i was so weak inside and I kept looking at Francis who was lying cold on the floor…….while the officers took me away.
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The mother is very wicked. I just hope she will not go to Prison
She is such a wicked woman, nice job Tobi
She is so heartless
This woman is a devil in human from.
Oh Tobiii, you have come again o. See wicked mama? Just keep it rolling in.
So mean a mother .... Tobi Loba ?
OMG who kind for mother is this, hope she will not go to jail,, tobi you're start with ur suspense abi
Oga oh, so sad
lmao..I havent startedanything yet now...
@Fabian..where have you been?
thanks for the comments fam
Hmmm! All did hate Js Bcuz of figure8 shape.very wicked
what a world!
Nawah ooo what kind of mother is this
As if she will have d figure 8 forever, mtchew so annoying...... Thumbs up to my fav writer of ebonystory
This woman is not a Mother oo she is a Monster!
Tobi... I've been too occupied these few days. Nice story you've brought to the dinner table. The aroma smells nice *winks* can't wait to finish it. Lol.
Tobi will be bursting somebodi's head.. Biko knack us d next episode kia kia
What kind of wickedness is this? Thumbs up to the writer. Awesome suspense.
Haa, this woman is real transmission of wickedness
Nice one Oluwatobiloba, I really love every bit of the story. Nice suspense. God bless your inspiration
Tobi,, you really made my days
Devilish
Nice one
Hmmm. What a mother!
Wicked mother..... I hate her
Chisos! I saw comments and be like...whaaaat! wow! you guys made my night..though the story is just like trying to cook jollof..we never put ingredients yet
This is so sad
what a mother....... this is Lucifer in Mother's form.. 9ice one dear
Not everyone that gives birth to a child deserves the tittle of a MOTHER.
Yes o abi o
So sad
Na thunder go strike
Na thunder go strike
that woman
Chaiee what a tragedy...
It serious
what a world
what a world
Twist of fate...weldone dude
Heartless mother
She's heartless
Useless mother
She's so heartless OMG ?
Hmm so heartless
I'm so pained right now
Heartless mother
Pure wickedness
What a heartless woman
'she make u lose ur figure,' na she put herself inside ur womb ? wicked woman.
Lol
What a mother!! Can someone please check the finger prints?
lol
Wicked mother,Tobi nice one
Pls stop referring to dt woman as Scar's mother. That woman is not a mother but a murderer
Jeez how could she. Wot a cruel woman. Don't u ever call her a Mother
lol
Tufiaka I prefer to be motherless than to have mother like this
Can a mother actually do this? This is too much.
hmmm
Worst than Jezebel
She's so wick
Yea she is
So cruel mother
Just stumbled on this page, wow! Am loving it already with the first story am reading right now
Just stumbled on this page, wow! Am loving it already with the first story am reading right now
Tragedy
Unbelievable!
SOBBING COME OUT WHEN AM READING THIS INTERESTING STORY @tobi loba more knoweledge for you
A wicked mind with no conscience. I feel 4 scarlet. Thnks Tobi.
Scarlet would have run, see what happened now