When A Woman Wants.. - Episode 29

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THANKS FOR READING FOLKS.THIS IS A BONUS CHAPTER AS AN EPILOGUE . DO YOU NOTICE THERE IS NO EPISODE ON WHEN ROSA AND FRANCIS KISSED..IT WAS A MISTAKE I DIDN'T UPLOAD IT. SOMEONE JUST SENT ME A MESSAGE ABOUT THAT. I'M SURE WE WOULD ALL LOVE TO KNOW HOW ROSA HAD LOOKED, HOW THEY HAD THE FIRST KISS AND WHAT HAD ACTUALLY HAPPENED
SURE SO I WILL USE IT AS A BONUS CHAPTER BEFORE THE EPILOGUE. 


ROSA
She couldn’t get down from the car, she was just too nervous. She kept on looking at Francis’ s hand which she was supposed to take so he could help her down . She just couldn’t,
It was almost ten in the night and they had just arrived at the FLEEZE. They had driven for a while before they actually got to the venue. Everything had been normal between the both of them all through the journey as they sat at the back of the Audi which had brought them. They had joked and laughed throughout the journey, nothing was out of place as they had both chose not to discuss what happened in the morning when they had almost kissed. Except for Angela’s call that had come in at that perfect moment. They didn’t discuss it..She was trying to ignore it as he was.
Here, she was, sitting down with one of the most-sought after billionaire men in the country, wearing an YSL Heels and a Dior gown the prices of which were totally more than her salary in a two years. She calculated it.
It had been fun at first and she was terrifically enjoying herself, especially the way Francis had looked at her when she was climbing down the stairs

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. Even John and the guys that were around then couldn’t stop staring, she had turned heads and the way she had felt then was indescribable. She didn’t know if she had ever flushed that much before.
“You are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen Rosaline“
John had said to her when she landed, placing a kiss on her cheek while Francis took her hand. “You never stopped amazing me.”
That had melted her. 
The other ladies of the house apart from Ella and Peri who had gone had all complimented her,Tatia and Bree had even helped her in dressing up. She never had issues with any of them. It was through them she had gotten to know that Debby had gone with Ella and Peri. The thought that Debby hadn’t invited her to tag along worried her. 
Did she know Francis would invite her?
The car came to a halt at around forty minutes after they had been driving around for a while. She didn’t really know the name of the area but she knew they must have left Abuja a while ago.
She could hear the noise of loud music and the press as well. She knew she couldn’t do this.
“Come, on Rosa, let’s go” 
She shook  her head. “I can’t Francis”
She expected him to be angry but he only smiled  and caressed her cheek with his thumb. He really needed to stop doing that, he had no idea what that did to her or maybe he did know and that was why he kept on doing it.
“You are with me Rosa, I invited you, we are in this together and I will hold your hand every step of the way. Remember I’m just getting used to this sort of life too. Why don’t you try enjoy it?”
She breathed in and out loudly.
Without asking her this time, he grabbed her hand and pulled her firmly but gently out of the car.
“I’m sorry but I had to do that.” He said as they walked in.
 The place was a mixture of both silver and gold . People arrived by the dozen . All dressed expensively. The paparazzi was much. She could spot faces she had never seen before except in movies and magazines.
Dainty diamond lights added surplus amount of color to the parade of footsteps. There was light everywhere, it was difficult to notice it was just some minutes past ten in the night.
Her hand was tucked in his bent hand and they walked to the entrance of the hall. She had no difficulty in walking in her heels as she had imagined. It was as if they were part of her legs. As they approached the red carpet, a group of people were taking pictures of a lady dressed in a black gown…she twirled around to show the full picture of the gown she wore while tens of microphones were before her.
“It’s Prada..”  The lady said into the mic that someone just extended to her. As she heard the voice, Rosa froze. Francis must have felt her froze for he squeezed her had to support her. It was Debby in the black gown.
Her heart was beating rapidly as they got closer and one of the photographers spotted them.
“Look, It’s Frank Nicholas’ son” She screamed excitedly and Rosa watched as they group rushed towards them, abandoning Debby who looked surprised and disappointed as the group was now formed around them. Blocking Debby’s view from her.
Camera light was all over her face as they recorded and took her pictures.
“We are happy to have you here Francis, can you tell us what you are wearing. I can see it must worth a fortune.” A lady in an all-white jumpsuit addressed Francis who only smiled.
“I don’t buy my cloths, I have someone that does that for me but I feel like I’m around one million naira clothed”
The crowd laughed at his joke and more flash lights on them as they  all walked to the Red carpet. She couldn’t turn her head for fear of meeting Debby’s gaze.
“Who is this gorgeous lady beside you Francis?” A man asked
“That dress is wow! ” said another lady.
“She is so beautiful, what is your name please?”
Before Rosa could answer, another shouted.
“Oh! It’s the lady he took to his mother’s grave. Wow! She is so beautiful, what is your name? Please tell us”
Rosa felt Francis’s touch, signaling for her to talk. 
Mustering courage , she spoke into the Mic. 
“I am Rosalina” 
“WOW! Such a beautiful name..Are you both getting married soon?”
“Is she your girlfriend or just a date Francis?”
She was getting uncomfortable with all these questions but they were all waiting expectantly for his reply.
“Yes, she is my girlfriend and her name is Rosa like she had said.”
Rosa was shocked. What did he just say?
Before she could say anything, Francis planted a kiss on her lips, silencing her. The crowd screamed  cheered and clapped and a billion flashlights must have flashed on them but her mind was so far away.
Right there, in the public, Francis was kissing her, when Debby was just some foot away. She couldn’t breathe, heat and cold sparked deeply in her at the same time as his lips touched hers. At that moment it was like the time was still and the noise of the public faded into the background and the worry about  Debby melted as she closed her eyes. He tasted of strawberry and she remembered he had licked a strawberry lollipop earlier. 
“I’ve wanted to do that since yesterday” He whispered close to her lips, giving her a cocky smile and a wink before pulling away, holding her hand....interlocking his fingers into hers...Like a real couple...This was getting out of hand…
“We are so happy to hear that. Please can we take your personal pictures?” the lady in the white jumpsuit asked and Francis nodded, squeezed her hand a little before moving a bit away from her so they could get personal Pictures taken.
Some minutes later, it was all over and Francis came over, holding  her by the waist.
“Debby, can you come over so we can take a picture of this beautiful couple and you together. You are  such a beautiful family, too bad Frank  isn’t here”
Rosa couldn’t look at her as she walked towards them, Francis was in between them and several lights flashed again.
“Can you smile please? Rosa and Debby?”
She grinned as widely as she could and she was sure Debby did the same.
“Perfect” 
Francis turned to her.
“Come on babe, let’s go”
She sighed as he spoke to her, holding her by the waist as they walked past Debby, she could feel Debby’s cold stare behind her and she knew she would have fainted if not for Francis arm that was around her. 


ALRIGHT I HOPE WE UNDERSTOOD THAT. SO LET US SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO OUR FAVORITE COUPLE A YEAR AFTER THE COURT SAGA...

EPILOGUE

“Careful Frank, if you break that medal, mummy would spank you”
Shouted Francis to his two years old boy who was running around with one of the medals his wife had been awarded two years back as bestseller for her novel-When A woman wants.

“Frank Nicholas, You should listen your daddy, Mummy won’t be nice if you break that thing” Said a pregnant Rosa, coming out of the kitchen.
Francis laughed and lifted Frank from the floor unto his laps as laughed excitedly.
Rosa sat beside her family while her husband put the other arm around her.
John came in, handling some document.

“Hello lover birds. Oh! Come on Frank and give Uncle John a hug”

The little boy jumped from his father’s laps and ran to hug his uncle who lifted him on his shoulder.

“Daddy daddy see, I’m taller than all of you” The boy sang excitedly.

“Oh sure you are” replied John with a laugh.

“So did you speak to them John?” Rosa asked.

“Yes. They want the fifth edition and I got news from Fox Screen that they would like turn it  into a movie so..we already made all the arrangements and finalized about the deal. Will tell you all about that Later. The Channels  TV also want to have an interview  with the two of you since the book is a true life story and you know, I have lots I need to discuss. Do you mind if we go to your office? ”

“WOW! Honey that’s fantastic, I am so proud of you” Frank said to his wife as he kissed her.


“Thanks Love” Rosa replied and stood up. “Why don’t we go to my office and discuss it John”

“Alright” said John as he handed Frank back to his father and followed pregnant Rosa to  a room that had once belonged to the former Mrs. Nicholas and which was now converted into Rosa’s personal office.
Frank smiled at his son. He was happy, he was probably the happiest man on earth. Rosa had won several awards for the book which she had written in a way that 
everything that happened in his life.

Read " Returned " by the same author ( Tobi Loba )

. It was his true life story. They had gotten married few months after the court saga, he had no reason to wait for anything. His hospital was ready now. His boy had come nine months after the wedding. John still worked for them, he was a very crucial part of their family. Angela and Romeo were fine too, they would get married soon. Everything was good, life was beautiful…


THE END


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    Amy Maduka
    This story is as beautiful, caprivating and interesting as it gets. Goodwork
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    Irene Avworo
    Lovely story, Excellent work Tobi Loba.
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    Tobi Loba
    Thank You Irene and Amy. Your comments are very appreciated.
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    Damilare Ayokunnu Ayodele
    Great, great and great Job Miss Tobiloba I decree more inspiration for you and dis shall be your stepping stone for u IJN.
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    Damilare Ayokunnu Ayodele
    This shall be your stepping stone to great success IJN...
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    Linet Maranga
    Am in Kenya.i have read the story and i can tell u that u are a genius,,,wonderful piece
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    Tobi Loba
    wow! All the way from Kenya. Thank you! Mr Dami,and everyone that commented..God bless you
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    Abigail Dzorka
    Great work Tobi... U did just marvelous with.... When a woman wants.....
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    assumpta obua
    You are such an exciting writer, so very different from the conventional. Didn't put this story down until I got to the end. You are damn good. Keep it up. I feel so good, so refreshed from reading this piece. THANK YOU.
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    Onome Bamidele
    I so much love this story.... More wisdom in Jesus name
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    Odunlami Omolola
    Miss Tobi dis story is really inspiring. Thanks for d write up more Greece to ur elbow.i used two days to read dis story u really trying. D sky is ur limit, I need more from you dear. U can also published it for school to read.seeing u at the top
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    This is best of all. You really have my 100 star award More grace dear.
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    Blessing Uju
    Best story of the season
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    Oluwadebie
    woow. Tobiloba you are such a good writer, I really hoped you also get awards just like Rosa in your story.
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    Tobi Loba
    Thank you so much for the comments everyone. I am more than grateful. God bless you
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    Kasie Eze
    Congratulations Tobi for winning the contest. Keep it up
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    Divie Gift
    What a nice piece. Though it needs to be edited for some grammatical errors, its an excellently intriguing story. Love d sudden twists that appeared in the piece though. Keep it up!
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    Emerald Efet
    It's 1:30a.m and I just concluded this masterpiece, I love reading so much that my husband tried to take away my phone, so whenever he does that, I just power up the iPad, and if he takes that away, I settle on my laptop. Lolzzzzz. ??? This is one of the best stories I've ever read online. Kudos to Ebonystory crew, y'all are doing an amazing job. I'm subscribed to your page for more!!!! Keep it coming!!!!
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    Benedicta Osei Arhin
    Wow! Such an amazing write up, kudos dear
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    Tobi Loba
    Thank you so much for your words of encouragements..
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    Magnificient work,excellento,nice,keep up the good work.
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    Adetoro Adedoyin Adedayo
    Too inspiring, loving and full of wisdom.God bless Tobi
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    Mercy Chukwuemeka
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    Janet Chiwetelu
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    Sussnarlison Mat
    Wow congratulations could do anything until I finished reading. So captivating.
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    Ekine Prudence
    Is so wonderful, I couldn't stop untill I finished. so so interesting, you're blessed with the gift of writing.
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    abutocracy
    This story is so'beautiful , since i started read it I could not stop smiling
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    Mary Ndirangu
    All the way from Kenya..I couldn't put my phone down untill I read the last sentence...this is the best story I have read online so far..you are gifted..I love the creativity.. keep on
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    lovely story dear, more power. I could not stop until I finished. wonderful job
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    Wow I can't luv u less 4 dis u ar jus 2 perfect wit ur writings... . more fame very soon
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    I so love this story.
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    Wow your talent is incredible, I haven't read a story this inrestesting in a long time. Nice one
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    Wow! Soooo lovely. With a happy ending too. I loved every part of it. Kudos!
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    Ibukun Ibiteye
    God I can't imagine I have to be awake till 2am so I could finish reading thus story. It so amazing, I love this dear, God bless ur work, u are the next Mrs frannicky . u will find favour. I prophesy to ur like through this work u will be great. Gid will uphold u and take u to the place if ur desire. I love this..
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    Ibukun Ibiteye
    Pls keep it up dear
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    Osmond-Nath Robinson
    Wonderful marvelous stupendifferous, l don't know how to describe it. Great write-up finished it in 30 mins and was fun and nice from the beginning to the end. A lil errors though but forgivable. In whole the book is awesome. And l will really love to be ur editor 2 keep d next brilliant work of yours error-free. If you are interested. My email address is [email protected]. but if you got one already it's no problem. I will really love to be an editor of your next great work. Thanks a million for wonderful piece???.
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    Augustina Paul
    The story is WOW.... More grease to your elbow and more wisdom Miss Tobi Loba...
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    Loved it from the beginning to the end, ur indeed a great writer. Keep it going...
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    Onyebuchi Peace Juo
    To be sincere ma,this story its just like a philipine movie:very lengthy and much of suspense.u did a good job ma.well done
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    Tobi Loba
    thank you so much.I am so happy you loved what you read
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    Tobilola, dat was a great piece. Really wonderful dear,I love it. Keep it up
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    Olivia Verioron
    Wow this is beautiful...more grace to your elbow....but you know maybe you should have add a piece on Debby like maybe like regretting all the bad stuff that she did,her alibi....good job
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    Thanks u so much...I rili enjoy everybit of it???
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    Kudos dear That's amazing U will go far
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    I couldn't help but read every episode one immediately after the other Great story!!!
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    JoeBishop Merobora
    Beautiful, powerful and breath taking story. Can't remember the last time I gave my time like this for any Nigerian novel. To be candid, you're such a beautiful writer and hope you'll write my story some day(smiles) Note:- from the Epilogue, the heading says "...A YEAR AFTER THE COURT SAGA..." But the first paragraph says "...shouted Frances to his TWO YEAR OLD BOY...". don't know if you understand me?
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    JoeBishop Merobora
    Beautiful, powerful and breath taking story. Can't remember the last time I gave my time like this for any Nigerian novel. To be candid, you're such a beautiful writer and hope you'll write my story some day(smiles) Note:- from the Epilogue, the heading says "...A YEAR AFTER THE COURT SAGA..." But the first paragraph says "...shouted Frances to his TWO YEAR OLD BOY...". don't know if you understand me?
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    Tobi Loba
    "oh.. yes. thanks so much.. didn't really notice..That's a good observation sir. Thank you. Will correct that. Lol, sure would love to write your story. Thanks for the compliments everyone. Please check out my new story titled Finding Solace"
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    Wow, you indeed a writer.chop kiss
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    All I can say is OMGosh! U gat me glued girl! Keep it up Madam.
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    Alabi Gideon
    It was a great piece. More grease and grace to ur endeavours
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    Alabi Gideon
    It was a great piece. More grease and grace to ur endeavours
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    Wow, this story deserved the award. Lona well done, well crafted work and action packed, you got me involved in the story as though i was also there witnessing events unfold.
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    So so interesting
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    It's just 2.28pm I just finished reading,,I couldn't stop Reading the story it's soo interesting,educative . .. I had to make sure that I read it to the end ,,thanks to Ebonystory.
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    Great stuff... Well done!?
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    Fafunmi Oluwafunke Omowunmi
    The story is so fantastic,i really enjoyed every bit of it.KUDOS.
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    Nice story,keep it up!
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    I just found a new pass time?spot on
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    Maryann Asemota
    Oh my God! You did a good job gurl! I love this story! Nice one!
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    Ojo Sharon
    I couldn't stop myself from reading , love this story too much .tanks writer for this wonderful piece
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    Aeeshar
    Wow i love it... Kudos
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    Joy
    Nice one, keep it up
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    peaceful
    What a captivated story.... U too much girl......more wisdom
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    Chikezie Oluchi
    such an amazing story. I enjoyed every part of it.
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    Pearl Lily
    U such a wonderful writer. nice story, keep it up
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    Justice Gathoni
    I have read the story about when the woman wants. It is really interesting ,captivating and inspiring .Infact it made me forget whatever i was supposed to do since it completely took away my attention .Keep it up. well done job..!!
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    Eunice Anenene
    What an awesome story!........in pigin .......'the tori tight'........kudos Tobiloba
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    it's just wow,i love the twist later on in episode 28 but thank God for both lovers
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    Nenye
    I couldn't comment till I read it all. U are one hell of a writer and amazing! Keep it up!!!
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    Nenye
    I couldn't comment till I read it all. U are one hell of a writer and amazing! Keep it up!!!
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    Nenye
    I couldn't comment till I read it all. U are one hell of a writer and amazing! Keep it up!!!
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    Anthonetteforgold
    Wow the story is captivating and awesome. More ink to your pen dear
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    Happy Godfirst
    Wow this is great tobi you did a wonderful work keep it up the sky is your starting point
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    Happy Godfirst
    Wow this is great tobi you did a wonderful work keep it up the sky is your starting point
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much every one
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    Harniel Amo-Ansah
    The story is as sweet,fun and beautiful as the writer. Beauty with brains.keep it up dear and hope these stories would one day end up in Hollywood movies
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    Tobi Loba
    hmmm..@Hanrniel, I do hope too. Thanks alot
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    Aderemilekun Oriowo
    Tobiloba you really make my days with this story. Keep it up expecting more of your story. More ink to your pen.??
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    Tochi Enyinnayah
    This is a wow
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    Mma Obi
    Tobi you are such an amazing writer. I love the suspense and it's captivating. Great job. Keep it up
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much for your comments people! Love you loads. Check out my other books,: Finding Solace and Second Chance
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    Chioma
    d best story DAT I have ever come across so far,keep it bro one love
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    Abigail Amande
    Wow!!! You're great!
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    Halisa
    Beautiful Tobi. Absolutely Beautiful! More power to your elbow!!!
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks people!
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    carmen
    Have read dis story over and over
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    Tobi Loba
    Hmm@Carmen, you keep enjoying it right?
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    D Treasure
    wow...oluwatobiloba have read d second book just in few hours and its not my fault, I just couldn't leave and I can say its a wonderful work....more and more divine wisdom upon u........love u so much for this
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks alot D Treasure
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    Daizy Love
    Wow..... This is really interesting, have been busy reading this forgetting to take my lunch.... Keep it up *Tobi* ..already in love with you and your interesting story.
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    Tobi Loba
    Aww... Thats so sweet. Lol..thank you
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    Olowo Baba
    THIS IS A VERY INTERESTING AND THRILLING STORY, ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ ON THIS SITE, KEEP FLYING. THE SKY IS YOUR LIMIT TOBI.
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    Olowo Baba
    THIS IS A VERY INTERESTING AND THRILLING STORY, ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ ON THIS SITE, KEEP FLYING. THE SKY IS YOUR LIMIT TOBI.
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    Fabian Ibeh
    Amazing, so amazing. Tobi you are a gifted writer. Well done dear
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    EnkayDee
    Beautiful beautiful all the way. More ink to your pen. I love this.
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    Onyeka Eboh
    I can't just recover from this story I'm a hurry. Goodness how do u do this. Ur indeed gifted. Keep it up
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    Tobi Loba
    thanks so much lol
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    Esther Ogundare
    Your write so well, it's captivating and inspiring Thank you More ink to your pen.
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    Adeoti Akindele
    Waoh stayed to my phone till d end of d story. @Tobi, I doff my hat, u are d best
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    Tobi Loba
    Awwe.thank you
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    clarence
    Tobi this is great work.....the story was awesome......bravoooo!!!!!1
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    Tobi Loba
    Thanks Clarence
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    Sammy
    Nne Nice one Dear
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    its 1:43am i just finished dis great story by dis great writer am proud of you tobi..more grease to your elbows..more knowledge and understanding
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks so much..did you finally upload successfully?
  • dasaolu1995@gmail.com picture
    [email protected]
    nope am still having difficulties uploading it..i dnt knw my phone is one small phone like dat i think dat is d reason
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Eh ya...why dont you call that number on the site?
  • Laura Abubakari picture
    Laura Abubakari
    wow.......I shud av met this place long tym. You r jux so gooooood!
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    thanks@Laura, welcome on board
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    Maame Arko
    I love ur stories dear. I pray u go far with it
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    amen..thanks ma
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    Preciousmercy
    I don't know what to say I love this The sky is your starting point Tobi Well-done
  • Oyelami Oladunni picture
    Oyelami Oladunni
    This is Articulate and Timing for my situation and state of mind,Oluwatobiloba darling continue to soar high and high you are a great writer,Sky is not even enough to be your limit WELL DoNE.
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    Evelyn Kalu
    this story is one of the best story i ever read. i love this.it? very educating
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen@Precious, thanks sis
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    Tobi Loba
    @Evelyn and@Oyelami, thanks lot
  • Elizabeth Ajayi picture
    Elizabeth Ajayi
    Wonderful story, so motivating
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Thanks sis
  • zinny picture
    zinny
    Beautiful story. You are really good
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Thanks Zinny
  • Kemi picture
    Kemi
    It wz wow!!!... Tnx for ds.. More grace.
  • Victoria Peters picture
    Victoria Peters
    wow! you're a bunch of talent ma. I enjoyed d story. thanks. more grace!
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    thanks sisters @Kemi and Victoria
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    topmaike007
    nice story... I enjoy every bit of it
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    Tobi Loba
    im glad, thank you
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    Tee MJ
    Wow!This is an epitome of a masterpiece Mister Tobi loba,the sky is your beginning#Kudos#
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    thanks so much MJ
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    Tee MJ
    Opps! my bad,Tooked u 4a Mister #Miss Tobi Loba# rather
  • Adorabe picture
    Adorabe
    This story is sooo addictive, Tobi you are my very Bea.
  • Ayodeji Ibrahim picture
    Ayodeji Ibrahim
    I really commend you for the stories as they are very touching and interesting. More ink to your pen
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    thanks a lot sir
  • Adeoye Olutofetoyin picture
    Adeoye Olutofetoyin
    What a lovely story. I love everything about the story. More inspirations to your aspiration
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Thanks so much ma, Amen
  • olaiya Oluwatosin picture
    olaiya Oluwatosin
    wow.. I never knew a site like this exist.. thanks for your good work.... SKy is ur starting point...
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Amen thanks alot
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    Princess gaius
    Wow.. Good work Tobi..... Congratulations
  • Mhercybae@gmail.com picture
    [email protected]
    wow.... this is amazinggggggg..... greater heights sis
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks Mhercybae and Princess
  • Nnenna Clara picture
    Nnenna Clara
    I love it. God bless you tobi and more inspiration.
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thanks ma
  • Sussan Okpeze picture
    Sussan Okpeze
    I really enjoyed it to the fullest, God bless you tobi, nd more ink to your pen
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Amen, thank you
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    edna addo
    Soon wonderful... I enjoyed every bit of it.. Well done.
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    thanks edna
  • Vivian Okonkwo picture
    Vivian Okonkwo
    This is good. Tobi loba you are going places
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    Tobi Loba
    Amen thanks sis
  • Ogunbanwo Abimbola picture
    Ogunbanwo Abimbola
    Tobi love, You are a prolific writer. I'm not surprised at this work because I've read your book once and I know what you are capable of....I'm amazed,it has always gotten better. The story was captivating....you should sell it, it would surely make a best seller. Trust me,i can't wait to read more if your stories. Keep it up dear.....the sky is your starting point.
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    Tobi Loba
    Awww, thanks so much sis
  • Ogunbanwo Abimbola picture
    Ogunbanwo Abimbola
    You're welcome
  • Laura picture
    Laura
    I must confess......its an interesting story.
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    thanks sis
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    Confy-Dencie
    This story is a bomb... I love everything abt dis story,, I wish I can see d look on Debby's face. You're good @Tobi ,thumbs up
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    thanks sis
  • Mayowa Vhivkidz picture
    Mayowa Vhivkidz
    Excellent, Best story so far though I knew with ms Tobi, there is still more to come.... Kudos to u, I couldn't sleep cus I can't get my eyes of this story was I started reading this noon n finish at 12:48 on nov 20/11/18
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    loool, thanks so much
  • Elizabeth Sakala picture
    Elizabeth Sakala
    When a woman . Suvh a very captivating story.I love reading and you really made me be glued to my phone for two solid days .You are good at it girl! You have inspired me to also start writing stories..God bless you girlie.
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Amen, i am glad, thanks Liz
  • Shulammite Konadu picture
    Shulammite Konadu
    Oluwatobiloba u are a damsel baby girl you really deserve a new sports car and thanks for the story you really made my day
  • Mawuse Sikabou picture
    Mawuse Sikabou
    Thanks for the write up dear. I really enjoyed every bit of it. May God continue to give you more insight, wisdom and knowledge like Solomon. Thanks once again.
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Aww, thanks Kanadu
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    Tobi Loba
    Mawuse, thank you, im glad
  • Ayeni damilola picture
    Ayeni damilola
    Nice job..... Keep it up..... Sky is your limit
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    Pamela cube
    Marvellous......thanx Tobi
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    Ogunmoyin Hormorneeycrown
    You are such a wonderful writer keep it up
  • Peculiar Ekpedeme picture
    Peculiar Ekpedeme
    Great Great Great,I enjoyed every bit of it,I couldn't help but read to the end. You're such a wonderful writer,I salute you keep it up
  • Peculiar Ekpedeme picture
    Peculiar Ekpedeme
    Great Great Great,I enjoyed every bit of it,I couldn't help but read to the end. You're such a wonderful writer,I salute you keep it up
  • Solomon Deborah picture
    Solomon Deborah
    Nice one dear, such an interesting story. I really enjoy every bit of it, May God bless your handiwork
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    thanks so much
  • Alhaja Omobola Balogun picture
    Alhaja Omobola Balogun
    Wahooo........ love ur story line, very captivating keep it up dear, d sky is ur limit
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Thanks Alhaja
  • Abena Kitsikpui picture
    Abena Kitsikpui
    Am most likely the silent reader. I love your stories. Just finished my second one in a day. Much love and please keep writing.
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Awww thanks Abena
  • Zainab Mohammed picture
    Zainab Mohammed
    Wow!!! What a happy ending.Tobi you are a genius. May you be our next President come this election.????
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Hahahahaha....
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    UjBless
    Amazing story...more grease to your elbow
  • Paradise pearl picture
    Paradise pearl
    never knew Nigeria has great writers, you are just one of them, thumbs up.
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    Tobi Loba
    lol, thanks Pearl and UJ
  • Obioma Esther picture
    Obioma Esther
    Wow this mind blowing I can't get enough it, I have enjoyed all ur stories keep it up darling and much love for you
  • Jenifer Adekunmi picture
    Jenifer Adekunmi
    Such a wonderful story.. ... Nice write-up.....
  • Lilly Ezeaku picture
    Lilly Ezeaku
    wonderful story
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    Florence Fakor
    One of the best stories I have read so far, you got talent girl. Keep soaring higher.
  • Tony Presh picture
    Tony Presh
    What a wonderful story. But then i have a question. Who is the real author ? Tobi or Rosaline?
  • Uche Aghanwa picture
    Uche Aghanwa
    soo sweeeeet
  • Jay Onosue picture
    Jay Onosue
    Did u hear wen I whisper ur name in silent? U re d best. Tnx alot......
  • Ezekiel Shausu picture
    Ezekiel Shausu
    thanks for the story, TOBI. I really love it
  • Divine Amrachi picture
    Divine Amrachi
    Wow!!!!!!!....what can I say....Tobi good work
  • Lasisi Olushola picture
    Lasisi Olushola
    As you write you impact knowledge.. Everything about this story is superbly great!
  • Prince Gyampoh picture
    Prince Gyampoh
    good work done Lobi
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    Prince Gyampoh
    good work done Tobi
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    Adekole
    Awesome
  • Valentine picture
    Valentine
    Honestly Tobi am dumbfounded cos words alone can't say how I feel reading this piece of breathtaking work you have here. The lord is your muscle. Keep soaring higher. Love you ooo
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    Adebitan Precious
    @Tobiloba You're.....you...are i mean you are.....as in you are OMG!!! Am short of words you are too good.....i don't even knw how to express my self just shop kisses
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    Queen Elizabeth
    Oluwatobiloba You’re indeed great I love you babe and God bless you
  • Fortunes Ayeni picture
    Fortunes Ayeni
    Oluwatobiloba Wow, that all I can say, you are such an egregious writer. Kudos to you, keep the fire burning.
  • Agboola Benita picture
    Agboola Benita
    What an amazing story! Keep on the good work.
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    AHMANII ATL
    I'm really wowed ?? Thanks for this piece dear
  • Mae wesley picture
    Mae wesley
    Lovely write up ma
  • Tobi Loba picture
    Tobi Loba
    Wow, thanks everyone
  • Bruce Murray picture
    Bruce Murray
    I love the story
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