The Puzzle - Episode 25

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It was a tough job keeping Daniella calm for the night. She kept crying for her mum. Rose tried to console her from time to time, but her efforts failed. The only person she talked to was Debbie. When the parents noticed this, they decided it will be better to leave them to be alone. Rose served them dinner. Daniella ate little, then she led them to Debbie's room to retire for the night . She could hear their low voices after she left the room. She went straight to their own room to join David. 

"Mummy twins!" David hailed her. "I can't wait to tell the whole world that I am now a twins' dad!" He added with excitement.

Roseline looked gloomy. The way Daniella avoids her griefs her so much.

"Don't worry Rose, what the girl is doing is normal. Now, think about it, imagine Debbie taken away from you tonight and introduced to someone else as her real mother, and to start living with the person immediately, will she agree?" David asked.

"Certainly not!" She replied..

"Exactly the way it is with Daniella too. It all happened too suddenly. She's been with this woman for eight good years, such memories cannot be easily erased. Let us give her some more time to adapt okay?"

"Okay dear, I understand."

They both knelt by the bed to pray, thanking God for the recovery of their child and for the restoration of their marriage...


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AT DR MICHAEL'S HOUSE

"I have to leave now," Loveth said shortly after the Evans left

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. Eliz had since locked herself up in Daniella's room, still mourning...

"Okay Loveth, thanks so much. I will see you at work on Monday. I need to take out some time to rest tomorrow being Sunday," Michael replied, then saw her off to the verandah.

He went straight to his bedroom, where she thought Eliz was but she was no where to be found. He later went to check at Daniella's room but found the door locked. Silent sobs could be heard from the entrance. He was sure she was in there. 

"Eliz sweetheart, please open the door, don't injure yourself with too much tears." He called.

"Go away!" Eliz screamed. I don't ever want to see you again Michael." She cried.

"Eliz, please hear me out. It is not also easy for me to lose Daniella at this time. We need to comfort each other, I am really sad too. Please open this door. Do not bear the grief alone."

After some seconds, Eliz opened the door. Her eyes were as red as blood and swollen. She held on to Daniella's picture and sat tiredly on her bed. Michael pulled her to himself. They both wept for some minutes.

"Please forgive me Eliz, it was the time of ignorance. I regret all I ever did to you while we were courting. But Eliz, I have come to realize that you are the only woman I love. I love you truly Eliz, if not I would have had an affair with someone else all these while that you left me alone to be in Nigeria. I was tempted at different times but somehow, I sailed through them all. As for the lady whose message you saw on my phone, claiming to be pregnant, if you had confronted me about it, you would have known the truth. She actually sent that message to a wrong number. I deleted it immediately I saw it because I knew the sender must have made a mistake. Please Eliz, believe me. Up till now, I never had sex with any other lady since we got married. I know we have been careless in our past, the way we both handled the pregnancies, the abortions, how I stubbornly refused to allow you keep the last one and all that... But in all of these Eliz, I promise to stay by you. This cross is not yours alone to bear. We shall have our own children by God's grace. Eliz looked at her best friend of eleven years who is also her husband of nine years, she knew quite well that no one is in the best position to console and love her the way Michael would. She threw her arms around him and they both hugged each other for a long time...


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AT THE EVANS' FLAT

Roseline couldn't sleep well through the night. She was the first to wake up that Sunday morning. She quickly went to the twins' room and to her utmost surprise, they were up already. Probably, the excitement was all over them too. They weren't only up but they were already in the bathtub, having their bath. 

"Wow! So early. It's just 6am. Hope you both had a nice rest?" She greeted. The girls nodded their heads. Eliz was surprised at their quiet reaction. She went closer to them to talk to Daniella but to her utmost amazement, she couldn't tell the difference between them. She decided to apply a little bit of wisdom. How can she be asking that "who is Daniella among you?" Isn't that funny?

"Debbie." She called.

"Yes mommy," they both answered simultaneously.

Rose was confused, she turned back to fetch David who was still in bed.

Yes, it was Daniella's plan. She had told Debbie that they could catch some fun by confusing their parents...

"Well, you know of course that Debbie has dimples on her cheek and I noticed yesterday that Daniella has a gap in between her upper teeth," David replied drowsily. 

"Oh honey, you are a genius, do you know I haven't even noticed the gap in her teeth yet? Those girls are naughty."

They both entered the girls' room again. David called, Daniella? Debbie answered in her place. 

"Yes?"

The parents looked at each other, they have gotten their answer already. The girl that answered has no gap in her upper teeth, that is Debbie of course. 

"Stop the huge joke, ladies. We already got the difference between you two. Debbie, you are not Daniella, why should you answer for her?" David asked, lifting them out of the bath tub. The girls started laughing.

"Now get prepared. We shall soon be going to church. Today is Sunday. Debbie, you can allow Daniella to wear any of your dress," David instructed the girls.

Their mum stood watching at the entrance of the bedroom door. She can't just wait to share her testimony at church today. She could imagine how surprised the whole congregation will be on seeing the twins!


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After church service that afternoon, David and Rose decided to pay Mr and Mrs Ernest a visit. They kept the girls at Evelyn's place. She was so happy to host the new twins.


They arrived at Dr Michael's place and they were warmly received. They chatted for a long time. The Evans were happy that the couple had settled their misunderstanding.

"Eliz, Rose called. I do not want you to be depressed okay? I believe in the supernatural power of God to perform miracles. I want you both to re-dedicate  your lives to Christ, ask for the forgiveness of your past sins, I am very sure that you both will soon share your testimony, your babies will come soon for HE is a miracle working God!"

"Oh yes!" David concurred.
He led the prayers. The couples prayed together fervently, asking God for mercy and surrendering their lives to Christ in totality. 

After the prayers. They all went to the Evans' place to drop Daniella's stuff and also take the girls out for a family picnic. They all enjoyed the outing, especially the girls, they had so much fun.  Daniella and Debbie were permitted to spend the night with the Ernests.

Roseline and Eliz later met the next day at Debbie's school to register Daniella too at school. The pupils and teachers were all surprised to see the wonderful twins.

"Mrs Evans, thanks for allowing me to spend time with mommy last night," Daniella whispered to Rose when she was about to leave.

"You are welcome Daniella but you know you are coming home with us this evening?"

"Sure ma."

"That's my girl, and I hope you will soon get used to calling me mommy." 
She nodded her head and ran off to play with Debbie and the other girls after saying goodbye to Eliz.


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EPILOGUE

Two months later, Rose sat in front of the mirror of her dressing table one Friday evening. She was applying some cleanser to her face with cotton wool. David sat behind her on the bed. He is more available these days, he made sure that he reduced his frequent trips away from home.
The twins were in the room with them too. 

"Won't you go to bed, you two and give mom and dad some privacy?" David said to the twins.

"What does adults do with privacy anyway? They always needed privacy." Daniella replied.

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. She is the most outspoken of the two. 

The couple burst out laughing.

Just then, Roseline's phone rang. It was Eliz. She was talking excitedly on the phone. 

"The Lord has done it Rose, you said it, it has happened. I am 4weeks gone. It's confirmed, I  am going to be a mother soon!"

Tears clouded Roseline's eyes, she was happy for Eliz beyond words. 

"HE is indeed a miracle worker, she replied. Congratulations! I'm so happy for you..."

The line went off...

 Debbie and Daniella were about being ushered out of the room by their Dad when suddenly Daniella turned back again and walked to Roseline at the dressing table.

"Mommy! Is that a boy or a girl?" She asked pointing at Roseline's baby bump.

"Did you just call me mommy?" Roseline whispered, tears welling up in her eyes. She felt so happy like she had never heard such before.

She drew Daniella to her and gave her a warm hug, tears trickling down her face. At last, the girl is hers.

"Me too!" Debbie screamed and ran into her mom's arms."

"Oh, don't be jealous Debbie!" Roseline chuckled and they all laughed...


Roseline gave birth to a bouncing baby boy few months down the line while Eliz also put to bed some months later, a beautiful baby girl!
They had so much love and  joy in their homes. 

It is good for couples to love and cherish their matrimony no matter what. 

"Two are better than one, for they will have a good reward for their labour."

The Bible also says, "One shall chase a thousand, and two shall chase ten thousand! There is power in unity. 
Glory be to God!


****THE END****

I am grateful to God, the author and finisher of this story. I thank all those who had been reading and following, especially those who have been dropping their wonderful comments, they motivated me a lot. I hope you all learnt some lessons?

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  • princess precious picture
    princess precious
    wow!!!!!! Amazing.........i love this story.........at last they reconcile and even Eliz gave birth.......GOD is really GREAT.......thank u ma @teniola
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    Pacuto Tuape
    Nice nice ending..I love twins..I hope I have my own one day...
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    Favour Abhatue
    Thanks Teni 4 Dis great write up, I really enjoyed it
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    Popoola Elizabeth
    Amazing, thanks
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    Patience Peter
    Wow nice story.
  • Ogundipe Olutayo picture
    Ogundipe Olutayo
    What a beautiful story full of lessons. Good job ma. I love the story
  • Adeoti Akindele picture
    Adeoti Akindele
    Waoh there is power in forgiveness, an amazing story! I doff my hat @ Moyosore more grace
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    Fabian Ibeh
    Nice story Dear. Now that I've read through this manual, I'm sure that I've learnt alot. Thanks
  • Raymond picture
    Raymond
    Awesome story. More grace. Anticipating ur next story
  • Olaleye Adedamola picture
    Olaleye Adedamola
    Good ending, you're good writer Teniola thank so much for this amazing story... God so good to Eliz give birth to her own daughter at last..
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    Ayomide Huntress
    Welldone pastor mrs. Very nice,interesting story
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    Idris Taiwo
    Nice ending, thanks for the interesting story.
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    Mandy-princess
    Forgiveness is divine. Thank you Teni, I enjoyed your storyline
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    Nuseli-edem
    Nice write up dear.
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    Afia Boahemaah
    Woow...kudos dear great work
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    Mariam Ogunlana
    @Teniola thank you so much...Very interesting story....
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    dolapo adewusi
    welldone ma
  • Moyosore Teniola picture
    Moyosore Teniola
    Thank you, Thank you, Thank you all! So grateful for all the comments
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    Ukbaby
    Wow... I really learnt a lot from your story..... Nothing is too hard for God to do... We just have to trust Him... Thanks dear
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    shittumariam
    awwwwnn........ is like it should be continued......but sha I really enjoyed it...... aaaaaaah the story is very sweet like Choco_Milo okay thanks to miss or Mrs teniola may God never removed that?knowledge thanks
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    Imy Jackson
    Nice,thank you
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    Miksi Coffee
    Nice story I enjoyed it and learnt a lot
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    Adenike
    Waoh wat a beautiful ending.love d's story
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    Attagirl Karen
    I always become sad when a story I'm so much into ends . You have done a great job honey Hoping to read more of your stories.
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    Ukay
    Fantastic... Keep it up
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    Moyosore Teniola
    Thank u all. E ya, so sorry @ Attagirl
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    Thanks teni. lovely story
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    Emash
    @Moyo, I said it that Eliz would have a child of hers too. well done. #Jesus@dcentre.
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    Latifa Seini
    Nice story
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    chisom Julia
    Nice one up you more grease to your pen
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    Temitope Elizabeth
    Wow! I love the ending part of it May God bless the writer More knowledge and more revelation
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    Esther Ogundare
    This story is soooo captivating, it's indeed a puzzle, one wouldn't be able to tell what's likely going to happen, well done and thumbs up.
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    Moyosore Teniola
    Thank you all
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    Funmi Anita Adesina
    Thank you for this, packed with lessons
  • Moyosore Teniola picture
    Moyosore Teniola
    Thanks to God ma
  • Aina Ayanfe Dave picture
    Aina Ayanfe Dave
    Wow! What a beautiful endjng!
  • Aina Ayanfe Dave picture
    Aina Ayanfe Dave
    Wow! What a beautiful ending!
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    Amma
    God bless u madam...your stories always carry advice 4 the youth especially the yet to be married...thank u 4 this...expecting more of this...
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    Ruth ita
    Very motivational n interesting story.
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    Moyosore Teniola
    Thanks Amma. Thanks Ruth
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    Uwem Udoh
    Interesting story dear,i have learnt a lot.Thank you
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    Moyosore Teniola
    You are Welcome!
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    Urge Agozism
    Once I get married I must make sure we communicate regularly. I won't harbour emotional distress in my heart ooo. I don learn something from this story. Thanks dear
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    Moyosore Teniola
    U welcome dear
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    Chidinma Nkama
    This story is really full of lessons indeed! Thanks moyo for such a wonderful storyline, I enjoyed it a great deal...
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    Moyosore Teniola
    U welcome Chidinma. Thanks for reading too
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    Sammy
    Awwwww lovely story
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    Moyosore Teniola
    Thanks Sammy
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    Mercy Ezigbo
    A very lovely story from a very wonderful writer. It's a story filled with good morals and a happy ending, thanks for sharing it with us, more grace come upon you, amen, I hope to read more of your works.
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    Moyosore Teniola
    Thanks Mercy. Very soon
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    Freeman
    Awesome story
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    Moyosore Teniola
    Thank you Freeman
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    David Olaide
    Wonderful story......God bless you
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    Solomon Vivian
    Great lesson learnt.. Tnk u for this inspiring story.
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    Kerenhappuch
    What a wonderful writer you are@moyo. More ink to your pen
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    Chekwube
    Kudos to u @Moyosore.....dis is a very nice story....keep it up
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    zinny
    Communication is really vital in every relationship so as to avoid a lot of mistakes. Eliz almost lost her marriage because she taught her husband impregnated someone. Thanks dear. Really learnt a lot . Keep it up
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    Moyosore Teniola
    Thanks to u all @ Vivian, Kerenhappuch, Chekwube and Zinny.
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    Pat Iz Omo Emumwen
    Wow what a beautiful story, I love twins I pray God to bless me with twin girls soon.
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    Moyosore Teniola
    Amen @ Paz. So shall it be
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    Tayo-james Motunrayo Nkem
    What a happy ending. This is awesome, more grace to u
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    Georgina Bestway
    nurse loveth should also hav a happy ending with child of her own for confessing her sins
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    oby oragh
    i love the story
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    Obioma Esther
    Dear this is beautiful I enjoyed reading your story God bless you and give you more inspiration
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    Yvonne Edoziem
    Beautiful piece.I enjoyed it
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    Valentine
    Nice work ma'am, always enjoying your books. Keep up the good work bcos me specifically learnt a lot
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    Michael progress
    my love for twins ehn especially identical. i enjoyed every bit of this story
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    Ogunyemi Grace
    It's a nice compilation...more ink to your pen WRITER.
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    Herty Wilson
    Beautiful story. God bless you
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    Taiwo femi
    Happy ending
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