My Priceless Jewel - Episode 29

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     *7years later*

I am a happy mother of two children. MUHAMMAD NASEER and RALIYA who we call maama. Naseer is 5yrs old while maama is three. Oh! Forgot to tell you all that naseer is stubborn type. Real stubborn i tell you. Arfaat now owns his own mechanic shop, a very big mechanic shop. Am proud of him.

     Junayd and Maria are also married, blessed with a kid, Mustapha . I can still remember the wedding day. How stupid of me to think things won't work between the two. Guess i was wrong. I graduated with a second class degree. Tried working but Arfaat said a big NO to that. Well, what more? Nothing. Am just a simple housewife.

It was a bright monday morning. I bathed naseer and maama, dressed them up in their school uniform. Naseer is now in nursery three, maama in nursery one.

     "Chew slowly naseer" i warned.

"Okay mom" he answered, but was still chewing like a dog.

     "Will you feed me Mrs Arfaat? Arfaat is starving over here". He said, sitting down on one of the chairs.

"Good morning dad" Naseer greated him, with food in his mouth.

   "Papy, good morning" Maama greated him too.

        "Morning my princess" he replied, as he took her up to his laps.

"Feed me papy, i don't want mom to feed me today."
 
"Oh really? But why?"

     "I just want you to feed me."

"Well, okay then, Tinkerbell, you feed me and i feed her. Naseer is the boss here, he eats himself."

WTF! Was Naseer just bouncing? Dammit

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. He love the name. Boss.

  I feed Arfaat as he feed Maami, and in no time, we were done.

"Up you go princess, wait for me in the car" he said handing the car keys to naseer. Geez, forgot to tell you all that Arfaat now owns a car. EOD.

"So?" He said, as he rested his head on my chest "anything for me before i leave?"

     "Uh! Stubborn soul mate. I have nothing to give you. Now, off you go" i said, trying to lift up his head.

"Hey! I smell something in your mouth" he said, looking at me quizzically.

    "Its just a sweet" i answered.

"Well then. I want it too". He said, opening up his mouth. I took out a sweet from my pj's. But then he closed his mouth tight shut!

"uhuh! I don't want that one. I want the one in your mouth."

   "Ssssmm!" I called him, stressing the name "the kids are gonna be late."

"Lemme have the sweet, and I'll leave."

   "Here" i said as i took out the sweet from my mouth. He still won't take it. "What again?" I asked, a little bit pissed off.

"Take it back, and lemme have it through your lips."

"Yaa Allah! You really are stubborn sm" i said, as i moved my lips closer to his. We all lost it, as soon as our lips touched eachother. It was warm and beautiful. I loved it.

   "Goodbye. Take care of yourself. Don't look at ladies. I've got a camera behind you."

As soon as it was 2:oopm, i heard the car parked outside. And Maama was the first to come inside. Her lunch box in her hand.

"Amished you mom" she said. Hugging me so tight "i lav you kinji" she added.

    "I love you more princess."

Its weekend, and we always spend weekends with our parents. We visited mai kunu first. She looked at us with pride in her eyes. Yea. I know. She's proud of us.

    "Dad" naseer called Arfaat "i don't love this old woman anymore. She's too old and chew kolanuts."

"What?" We both asked surprised.

   "I said i don't love mai kunu anymore!" He said shouting on top of his voice.

"Kai! Aurenmu auren zobe ne". Mai kunu said smiling.

    "I still don't love you anymore" he said.

"But she loves you son" Arfaat said chuckling.

  "Lemme have the car keys dad" he said looking serious.

"Car keys?" Arfaat asked surprised.

    "Yes dad. I want to go outside and wait for you all. I don't want to be looking at her old face". We burst out laughing.

Hajiya Azumi was hell loosed, she has gotten old the more. Her rigima added.

    "Arfaat my husband."

"Who's your husband? No no please. I belong to juwai only" he said hugging me and placing a hot and warm kiss on my lips.

     "Kajimun yan tselen uwa! A gaban nawa kuke iskanci."

"Just tell me if you want it. I can beg him to kiss you". Juwai said grinning.

   "Kinci gidanku" she said, as she smacked me on my laps.

"Dad! Dad!. Grandpa is calling you both".

Read " From The Eyes Of A Spinster " by the same author ( Murjanatu Alkali )

. Naseer called from the doorway. And off we go.

Alhamdulillah. My life is full of happiness once again. I realized that not all things are settled using revenge. I would've loosed arfaat now if not for yaa junayd's big heart. I respect him a lot for that sacrifice. I, who hate a poor man now lives with one. I, who lack respect for elders now give everyone his deserved respect. What more could i ask for? Nothing! Alhamdulillah for everything.

And it ends here. You might have come across loads and lots of errors and i know you all have. I am not a perfect writer, but i do hope you all enjoyed this fictional story.

Have you learnt a lesson from this story? if yes, what?

Oh, and before i go, among the three books I've written___TRAPPED IN A JUNGLE, EMBEDDED ROSES, AND MY BABY PRICELESS JEWEL____WHICH IS YOUR FAV AND WHY?

Thank you all for reading and dropping those touchy comments. I really really do appreciate you all! Thank you loads and Bye.
 

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  • Olaleye Adedamola picture
    Olaleye Adedamola
    Thank you Murjanatu for this learn how forgive / forget people dat hurt u in past not all revenge turn to good at time. I really enjoyed all ur stories. More grease to ur elbow. Am expecting another wonderful story.
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    Favour Abhatue
    Hmmmmm, what more can I say? U are d best. I really enjoyed my priceless jewel & I wish it can continue. Thanks a lot
  • Boluwatife picture
    Boluwatife
    I love dis one most! More grease! Great work!
  • Rachael Nnanke Omini picture
    Rachael Nnanke Omini
    Thanks so much Mj..Not all revenge turns out good.....All your stories are wonderful but I still prefer trapped in a jungle cos I rily learnt a lot from it and makes me to like d Muslim culture a bit.....I pray for more inspiration to write more
  • Tochi Enyinnayah picture
    Tochi Enyinnayah
    Thanks n well done MJ. I loved this. Humility is a great virtue. U don't use a wrong to right a wrong. Shay u get me?
  • Opeoluwa picture
    Opeoluwa
    Great job
  • Idris Taiwo picture
    Idris Taiwo
    The three of your stories are the best. What a nice ending............
  • Ameh juliet picture
    Ameh juliet
    Awesome ending.. More ideas to your brain bank
  • Ugo Best picture
    Ugo Best
    Wow, i love dis story a lot just wish d story did not end, may God give u d strength, knowledge and wisdom to write more storys
  • Mandy-princess picture
    Mandy-princess
    From this story, I've learnt not to seek revenge cos it might destroy the people involved. Not all stories end this way. Forgiveness is key. Well done.
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    Mandy-princess
    I enjoyed every bit of your write up
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    [email protected]
    I love all sis, you are a genius
  • Ngozi Awagu picture
    Ngozi Awagu
    I learnt never to give up on any one, who would have believed that juwaii will change for good. I love this story most among others
  • Murjanatu Alkali picture
    Murjanatu Alkali
    Wawwwwuuu..I'm really really glad you've all learnt alot from my stories. And am glad you've all enjoyed them. Thank y'all beautiful souls for the heart touching comments, i feel y'all and do appreciate. Thank you.
  • Amma picture
    Amma
    great work....will be expecting more
  • Mauray Anyanwu picture
    Mauray Anyanwu
    Love you loads M. J for this piece. Love all your novels but this is the best... More grease to your elbow
  • Abigail Amande picture
    Abigail Amande
    Thank you very much, you have done a good job. This one is the best out of the three.
  • Popoola Elizabeth picture
    Popoola Elizabeth
    Waooo,i have also learn a great lesson from this story keep it up
  • Kelly picture
    Kelly
    My priceless jewel is my favorite....... I love d story it nice
  • Kasie Eze picture
    Kasie Eze
    My sweet MJ, I don't know how to really appreciate you for the wonderful stories you write here. Just know that all of us at ebonystory loves you. Keep it up dear and may God continue to increase your power of imagination and inspire you more.
  • Murjanatu Alkali picture
    Murjanatu Alkali
    @Kasie, thank you Boss! Really appreciate you. And am glad am part of the team. Yeah yeah, thank you all for the love, for reading and for appreciating my work. Am really glad.
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    Ediugho patience
    Love this one more thanks dear
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    Happy Godfirst
    I enjoyed every bit of your write up thanks
  • Jemmy Zee picture
    Jemmy Zee
    You deserve some accolades Murja!!! Thanks for this story!!! I learnt that it's never too late to start over again!!! And life offers a second chance to tho with a sincere heart!!! Keep writing!!!
  • Murjanatu Alkali picture
    Murjanatu Alkali
    Thank you, thank y'all darlings. @Jemmy, thank you dear.
  • rely Ikonah picture
    rely Ikonah
    tanks Dear learnt so much from the story... more grace to you
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    Ukbaby
    Heart warming story.... It pays to forgive and let go the past. That's what I learnt.
  • D Treasure picture
    D Treasure
    love it....kudos to u
  • Murjanatu Alkali picture
    Murjanatu Alkali
    Thank y'all darlings!
  • Veraline Pohlmann picture
    Veraline Pohlmann
    Beautiful story indeed.
  • Ekine Prudence picture
    Ekine Prudence
    wow, that was great, kudos to you
  • Murjanatu Alkali picture
    Murjanatu Alkali
    Thank you Darlings.
  • Pamela Essien picture
    Pamela Essien
    They stories are a master piece. Very intriguing and fascinating. More wisdom to cook more stories.... Lol
  • Murjanatu Alkali picture
    Murjanatu Alkali
    I surely will cook more God's willing. Thank you.
  • Rasaq Dammy picture
    Rasaq Dammy
    nice story, more kudos to you
  • Aja Ra picture
    Aja Ra
    Murjanatu u r very good. May Allah bless you for this full of advice story
  • Murjanatu Alkali picture
    Murjanatu Alkali
    Thank you so much
  • Ola Mide picture
    Ola Mide
    I love this.. Nice one dear, keep it up
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    Obioma Esther
    Sweet I love this story
  • Khadija Yunus picture
    Khadija Yunus
    Well done Murjanatu and the story is amazing, brilliant and i personally don't believe in taking revenge, so overall after reading this beautiful story of yr my beliefs get stronger. Thank you and keep up the good work, best of luck in yr life?
  • Murjanatu Alkali picture
    Murjanatu Alkali
    Thank you so much @Ola and Esther
  • Murjanatu Alkali picture
    Murjanatu Alkali
    Thank you @Khadija. I'm glad the story has helped in your positivity. Thanks alot.
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    Princess Alicia
    I learnt that always be on your best behavior and live a low key life not a shiny life. Thanks for the story it really helps a lot
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