Best Friend - Episode 29
OKAY SO THIS IS THE FINAL EPISODE. THANKS TO ALL THOSE THAT TOOK THEIR TIME OUT TO READ AND COMMENT. ESPECIALLY BENCY, MOJISOLA, ANABERY AND OF COURSE GRACE. YOU GUYS ARE THE BEST. SO IT WAS NOT A WASTE OF TIME AM SURE. SHOW A BROTHER SOME LOVE AND RATE ME SO I WILL WRITE BETTER, THIS IS MY VERY FIRST WRITE AND WITH YOU I KNOW I CAN GET BETTER. THANKS
I looked at all I had done, and smiled satisfactorily, everything was in order, the house was perfectly arranged and sparkling. The dinning table especially was set, dressed with fine rich silk and blue plates that matched its colours. I made dinner myself although I must confess mum was on the phone all through. I wanted to make something special for Paris and had planned a little romantic meal together in the new apartment I moved into.
I checked the time it was already 30 minutes past the hour of 7 and I knew she would be here any minute. I heard a car drive in I took one last room and left the room offing the lights.
I stood by the drivers door when I noticed she drove herself this time, I opened the door for her and gave my hands to help her step out of the car like some queen. She looked at me smiling and took my hand and stood. I drew her in for a hug and gently kissed her neck "welcome babe" I said looking in her eyes
She smiled giving me a suspicious look, I locked the door, held her waist and we walked in.
"I thought there was light why us it so dark in here" she asked as we got into large well furnished parlour.
"Shh don't you worry about that, I will turn the lights on" I said as I hugged her from the back, I pulled her hair backwards as I kissed her lips, she quickly opened her mouth and kissed me back
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. I pulled away and turned on the light. She just stood looking at me in amazement
"Fred what are up too" she said showing her set of beautiful white teeth
"Nothing babe, absolutely nothing" I said sounding mischievous as I walked to her
"Okay let's get you to the bathroom and clean you up, I can see you are very tired" I said as I turned her around placed my hands on her shoulders and gently pushed her
"Somebody is in a super good mood today, and oh God what's that delicious aroma?" She said as she inhaled deeply
"I don't smell nothing, I guess you are just hungry that's why you smell food, you know I don't cook" I whispered in her ears as I pulled off her suit jacket.
"OK I will let you freshen up meet me downstairs" I said as I left her in the room
I quickly went down set the dinner table put off the parlour lights and lit some coloured candles arranged in a love shape on the table. By the time she was done and about to open the bed room door I was already standing there waiting for her
"Oh Fred you scared me, what are you up too Fred you have been sneaky and mischievous this evening"
"Umm can you stay the night?" I asked looking serious
"Yeah of course I wasn't planning to go back home its late already" she said looking at me trying to understand what I had in mind
"You look beautiful" I said looking at her from head to toe, she wore a pink bump short and a white mini shirt that stopped just beneath her bust leaving her stomach uncovered.
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. I smiled as my eyes still could not stop staring at her.
She gently hit my cheeks "you are been a naughty boy this evening"
"Oh am sorry, hey look over there" I pointed down the corridor and she turned I immediately sweeped her off her feet lifting her up bridal style. She shouted laughing and hitting me.
"You are crazy" she said laughing
I carried her down the staircase,all the time not daring to tear away my eyes from hers. I dropped her down in the dinning that was lighted up by the candles bright enough to see the red roses scattered every where around the table. She gasped, covering her mouth as I pulled out a chair for her to sit and served her meal.
She smiled so much I thought her mouth would tear or her cheeks would burn from how much she blushed.
"Wow this is so romantic but I do hope the taste of this food would not send me to a hospital" she said laughing.
I said nothing just sat across the table with my chin on my hands and a smile in my eyes as I waited for her to put the spoon in her mouth.
Her eyes opened wide as she tasted the food "Fred your mother is around, there is no way you made this"
I laughed and laughed harder as she dramatically stood up and was shouting "hey mama, my love I know you are here come out" all round the house.
"Wow thanks this was palatial but you still haven't told me who cooked this" she said.
I looked at her then fixed my gaze at the burning candles
"You know candles are a light source, they shine so beautifully bright carrying that fire on their heads. But you do know without the candles thread it can't burn, it can't shine so beautiful."
She said nothing just looking at me and wondering where I was going with this
"Together the candle and the thread burn gently till their end and when there is no more thread, there is no more candle." I moved close to her and held her hands. "Paris you are my fire, you are the reason why I shine so beautifully bright, you are my thread and without you I will lose my shine. Baby please burn with me till the end of my time, without you there is no me. Please marry me" I said now on my knees as I brought a sparkling diamond ring.
She was speechless for a while then showed me her fingers where another ring already was
"Babe I said yes before....."
"Oh you do know some phsyco doctor messed with my brain right? This is a memory I want to always have and cherish till the day I die"
She smiled, a tear rolled down her left cheek, she removed the old ring and flung it behind her. I fixed in the new and she flew into my arms in a hug.
"I love you Fred, I always will" she said sobbing silently.
Its been ten years now since that beautiful day I made Paris my wife, we were blessed with three children and now lived in Brooklyn where I worked as a doctor and she running her fast growing empire. Kunle still had 26 more years in jail as i heard the last time I called Dustan although he did say the phsco doctor mysteriously disappeared. All that is none of my business now, all I know is I married the love of my life and lived happy ever after.
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Well-done David, I like ur story and enjoying it. It amazing. God blessed you. We been expecting another fantastic story.
What a happy end, the good will always triumph over the evil. Great job u did, kudos
Wooooow I love this
Thanks David it was wonderful nice one
so beautiful
Beautiful story.
Wat a beautiful story, so unpredictable
Nice story,it was indeed unpredictable and suspence filled...keep it up
Wow! Even though you try to mess with our brain just like that pysco doctor did to Fred your story is just so good for a 1st timer. Weldone
A job well done even though it too a while but u nailed it
Mmh wonderful...,
Thanks everyone your comments are making my head so big its impossible to walk right now.
Hehehheehhe. Me laughing out loud and then smiling like Mumu cos of Fred love poem of ' Paris being the thread and the fire that light Fred up' chai love is sweet ooh. Make love story no kill me 1 day. Well done great man @otsedavid thumbs up to you
Oh huntress thanks your comments have been inspiring. When, if I decide to write again you must comment.
Thanks David. The story was worth the time and stress. More wisdom
Haa. The story has ended??? Really?? I'm gonna miss all the characters. Hope you'll post another story soon. I really enjoyed the story, though sometimes, I felt like beating you up buh well, it's part of it. Wink. Don't worry, you can now sleep comfortably, I won't haunt you down again. Thank you OtseDavid. This is a great job well done. Alert us when you post your new story oo. I'll certainly read. This is a great job well done. Bravo!
Lovely
Wat a beautiful story, so unpredictable
thanks Lizzy am glad you liked it and amen
hahaha Grace you are funny.yes o I can now actually sleep ah you can disturb but am grateful for that and sure you will be the first to know when I post again. Gracias señorita
thanks Carmen and Wadikom
A great piece by all standards. ..well done
A very interesting story filled with suspense and romantic themes, I love the way it is also very unpredictable like others have said. You are a very good writer, if this is your first story and it is this good, then hope to emerge as one of the best four one of these days. Well done and keep up the good work, but I would implore you to try checking for errors in your subsequent stories before posting, hope to read more of your works.
Hmmm....people are wicked
Interesting story.....full of suspense n highly unpredictable.......
Highly unpredictable but it was worth the read
Wow this is super interesting, Thumbs up Otse David
Thumbs up OtseDavid.
thanks am sure your emotions were engaged. Thanks for reading
Awww that was very interesting
Good story line, a bit confusing but it was worth it. ?
Wow, wonderful
Wow, wonderful
Wow! A nice story
Wow
nice story
Just read d story at first I was lost and confused but Alas it turned out to be an awesome story! I doff my hat @David u are d dope more grace
A very brilliant story. I really love it. Especially the part where Fred's memory was tampered with.?
Nice story
You are really good. Thumbs up dear
Tihis is the first time am reading something like this, you literarily blew my mind! God bless your intelligence....I enjoyed this
More inspiration n more ink to ur pen David.....this is really dope
Wao. Lovely story. So many lessons learnt.
Great story.....!
Wow, this is so sweet
I enjoyed this story