Beautiful Mess - Episode 35

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5 years later.

"I wish daddy was here"

Jasmin says as we stand in front of the boarding school.

I feel that familiar longing course through me and I squeeze her hands.

"It's fine baby girl"

I say as I kiss her head.

My baby is a grown girl now, she is even going to boarding school and everything.

"I will miss you Maman" she says and I nod, not trying to say anything so I won't cry.

Coupled with my longing for Garrett and other things I will totally break.

I watch as she drags her suitcases in and I wave goodbye.

She disappears out of site and I wipe my tears before getting into the car.

I drive the long distance home and it takes me two hours.

When I get home I slide the double door of the beach house open and our dog, bates runs out.

"Hello, boy, did you miss me?"

I ask and he gives a woof.

I smile at him and I walk in.

I got Bates when the loneliness got too much.

It was too lonely at night.

I make some coffee, I begin to take a dip when the double doors slide open.

"Is she gone yet?"

Garrett asks in an expectant tone and I squeal.

"You are home?!"

"I told you I would be back, why are you so surprised?"

He asks and I pepper his face with kisses.

"I know you said that but you know I can't be far from you, you were gone for two weeks"

I say and he kisses my lips deeply before swinging me around.

"I'm sorry"

He says and he sets me down.

I nod before answering his earlier question.

"Yes, she is at the boarding school already, she missed you, will you go see her next week?"

"I will"

He says as he bends down to scratch Bates who has been trying to get his attention.

"Do you want to go see her?"

He asks and I nod, the familiar pain going through me as I remember.

We walk towards the back of the house and get onto the bike there.

He drives us down to the cemetery and we get off.

We walk hand in hand down to the grave as I bend to pick sunflowers to place at her grave.

I sit by it and I begin to speak.

"Hey Mimi, how are you?"

As usual there is no response, I feel Garrett get down beside me and I lean into him.

"Hey brat, how have you been? I am back from my trip"

Garrett says and I hit his hand at the brat comment.

He laughs and we sit a while watching the sun and the clouds.

When I felt like I had lost my husband a man had stepped in, he had given me a choice, telling me I could choose between my self and Garrett. 

Mimi paid the ultimate price, giving her life for Garrett's. 

At the time I did not know what it meant but I later found out that Mimi was never coming back. 

After that Garrett told me everything, everything about himself, how he was supposed to kill the Osei family and how Honey also know as Stephanie was the last he was supposed to kill. 

About Will's betrayal, how Will wanted me and wanted to be like Garrett and how Will almost killed him. 

The bastard. 

Marcel comes to visit once a while and it's good to have a family of Garrett's. 

His mom is still not interested in us so we are also waiting for her to come around. 

We haven't heard anything from the Shaws and William and I hope that is the last of it. 

"What are you thinking about?" 

He whispers in my ear and I smile. 

"How lucky we are to have a god watching over us" 

I say and he kisses my neck. 

"We aren't lucky baby girl, we deserve it and everything" 

I nod because I know it's true. 

I turn around to kiss his head. 

"I love you Kis" 

He says and I nod. 

"Love you too, Garrett" 

We stay like that and I feel full to bursting, I feel happy. 

Yeah, it was good, my Beautiful Mess was and is still worth it. 

 

AN. 

To every body that read Beautiful Mess, You are a Legend! 

Thank you for reading and reading and reading and being patient. 

I love you, yes I do. 

Please don't forget to like, rate and comment. 

I love you. 

Please anticipate my next novel. 

Don't forget to drop a comment and if by chance there's a part you don't understand? Let me know. 

Thank you!! 

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  • TOSH picture
    TOSH
    friend like mimi... a super duper nice suspense filled stosy.,. i love it ehn..... weldon
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    Manza Manu
    Uwww....I totally loved it...u really nailed it
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    Blessed Daniel
    Nice Art. Thumbs Writer.
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    Cynthia Obi
    Awwww I love ur stories because it always have a happy ending. Thumbs up
  • Oluwakemi Oluwatoyin picture
    Oluwakemi Oluwatoyin
    Mimi is a friend indeed.... Really love dis story... Will waiting for ur next story... Love u too dearest
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    Loveth Dennis
    Nice work gal kip the vibes will b xpectyn more wonderful wrk of urs
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    Favour Abhatue
    It was a beautiful story & a beautiful ending, I enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks for your time
  • Jose Holuwadamilola picture
    Jose Holuwadamilola
    Mimi is a Darling. I enjoyed this piece. To the writer, don't forget to prosper.
  • Sussan Okpeze picture
    Sussan Okpeze
    What a sacrifice, @mimi she is a friend indeed, nice work @bebe , I really really really enjoyed it thank you so much.
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    Bubbles
    Wow A beautiful mess indeed
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    Adeoti Akindele
    What a Beautiful Mess indeed! Beautiful story line. Bebe u deserve an accolades, cant love u less and hope to read from u soon. Big hugs babe
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    Benedicta Osei Arhin
    Wow! Garrett had a second chance to life, what a great story, thank you bebe
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    Vikiy
    awww mimi.... wat a huge sacrifice. thank u bebe for keeping me glued, God bless ur hand....
  • Olasumbo Ayodeji picture
    Olasumbo Ayodeji
    Mimi is more than a friend,God bless her soul ....dis is a beautiful story, I love every bit of it
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    Amina Onaghise
    a minute silence for u Mimi........,........ u r really a dear friend thanks for keeping my couples alive and thanks girl.... this story rocks.
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    Julian Kits
    Oooh poor mimi... Thnx fr writing thou. We are waiting fr d next one, God bless the works of your hands.
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    Oluwa Gbemisola
    Well done baby girl. Looking forward to your next book. More ink to your pen
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    Teema Zarma
    That was awesome baby girl, can't wait for the next story, may God grant you good health so that you'll continue to write for us, we love you, oya chop plenty kissesssssss.......
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    Ngozi Awagu
    Nice one dear ,I love the way it ended
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    AbdulRahman Adebisi
    Nice one bebe. You're the best ah swear. Hope to see you soon.. Love ya scarra
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    Emmy William's
    You're so so beautiful just like your stories, Aaaah birds of the same feathers flocks together. Ooh now I know.Good work ma'am
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    Fabian Ibeh
    With the comments so far, I need to go read starting from the beginning Bebe.
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    Ukbaby
    Great story
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    Bebe Ernest
    Thanks everyone, and also don't forget to check my wattpad for new updates of howl, I'm still continuing there, thanks for the great support
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    Fatu M
    Wow. Congratulations for the job well done
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    Hanel Mbuya
    I love your stories Bebe Ernest. they are out of this world. great work anticipating another. lol
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    Orlurlardey
    awwwwn, i enjoyed every bit of this. more grease to ur elbow dear.
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    Ucheoma Rufus
    It was a very beautiful stormy was getting a bit confused in the last episode but later cought up. Thanks so much and I hope that the next one will be more interesting.
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    Confy-Dencie
    Beautiful mess, ,Beautiful story. Mimi is a true friend, missing her already (sobs) .Kudos to u Bebe,,dis story is amaaaazing,,I really enjoyed it
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    Ola Mide
    Hmmm beautiful mess
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    Julianah Ifewunmi
    Nice One Dear, I Love It So Much. More Inks To Ur Pen. God Bless Ur Handwork.
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    Obioma Esther
    Bebe thanks for this wonderful story I enjoyed it more inspiration
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    Pamela cube
    A great story indeed.....!
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    Sekemi
    Wow this story is one of my best
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    Angela David
    Mimi is a good friend
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    Paloma Asante
    Mimi the heroine
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    Lo is
    Waaaaw... It was truly amazing
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