Love Does Not Cost A Thing - Episode 4
This chapter is dedicates to my parents
"Inaliliahi wainalilahi rajiun" those were the words I could say with tears in my eyes after I heard what my parents told me. How could ya Abdul say that he wants to marry me? Ya Allah, I don't want to marry ya Abdul I said to my parents still crying, my father said he wanted me to know so as to prepare myself and I was dismissed immediately after that.
I rushed into my room still crying, Bibi heard everything and she felt bad for me. I was still crying when Jay called me, he knew something was wrong with me cause my voice has never been like that before, I told him what my parents said and he advised that I should calm down and go to bed that we'll talk tomorrow in school which I obyed after calling my friends and told them what happened we all agreed to talk in school tomorrow.
I left home for school earlier today I couldn't wait to see Jay so I can cry my eyes out after the lecture we were alone and we talked he felt my pain and asked me to stop crying. I hugged him so tight like a baby who's afraid to loose his mother and asked him "Jay are you going to leave me now? you know its you I love right?" And his words melted mt heart "darling I'll never leave your side, remember that always I'll fight for you".
On my way home I saw ya Abdul's car parked in my school, he was putting on a white kaftan dress, he was smiling at me, I approached him and greeted him and he said he's here to take me home.
He told me that he has falling in love with me for a very long time and he's willing to do anything to make his wife, I was quiet throughout the whole drive home, when we arrived I went straight to my room without eating dinner, I slept off while speaking with Jay on the phone.
Since it's weekend, my mum called me to have mother and daughter conversation
. Her words were 'my darling daughter you know I won't do anything harm you my dear
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. ' I told her umma, ni ina da wan da mu ke so juna da shi (I have a boyfriend already) and I love him. She was suprised because she's never seen me with a man before.
I called Jay immediately out of over joy and told him I told my mum about him and she would like to meet him in person.
Sorry guys I have to rest my pen here, its been a very long day for me but I promise you Next chapter would be long, catchy, interesting.
But do you think Mariam's mother would accept her daughter's relationship with Jay because he's a Christian and do you think ya Abdul would be able to make mariam fall in love with him?
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The fact that his a Christian makes things more complicated. Ride on am with you
This is a great piece you got here, but it looks like you are rushing it. Take your time to develop d dialogue for each character well
It all depend, while some parent doesnt mind inter religion relationship others doesnt allow ay all but love shouldnt be forced it should come naturally. Ride on Amina we gat ur back
I don't understand I thought you said abdul was bibi's brother and bibi is mariam's cousin, therefore abdul is her cousin Can she marry her cousin?????